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Gah! I've been waiting so long for this chapter, and you sure didn't disappoint. Keep up the good work!

best f**ckin first chapter EVER!!! I love how mean they all are to each other and how believable it is. I usually wait til' the end of the story to review but this one deserves a first chapter review. REALLY, REALLY GOOD!!! I'm gonna keep reading and I hope it gets better. :) GOOD JOB!!

Hi, first off i just wanted to let you know that I'm not normally into these kinda of fanfics. They make me blush and giggle like a twelve year old, however my friend told me to read this, and I'm so glad I did.
As i said just the idea of sex turns me into a bumbly preteen, however I really believe this story would have lost so much if it weren't for those scenes. They brought out so much of the angst, hopefullness and utter loss the characters face.
Out of all the fanfics I've read this is probably one of the most satisfying. Your writing style just draws the reader in.
The short sharp sentences that end up conveying so much meaning. The way you have remained true to the characters yet have made them your own. You are truly a gifted writer.
I can not get over this fanfic. It's just fantastic.
Thankyou for sharing this wondweful piece of writing with us.

I'm so close to tears it's fucking sick. God. It's not even the stuff that happened in this chapter (although -of course- that contributed to it) it's that there isn't any more. For the past week or so, every moment I had of free time (which isn't a lot) was spent reading this blasted story. And now, you cut me off here. God. I can't function. I don't even know what I'm doing. When I was going through my normal, every day life, it was all made somehow better by the knowledge that I got to come home and read this. Now I can't. That's really depressing.

*sigh* Wow. Sorry. Not to get all melodramatic. I really didn't mean to sound... I don't know. Depressed and suicidal and stuff. I'm not... I'm just very, very caught up in your story. And extremely mad that I don't get to read the next chapter right now.

Just... update soon. Save my sanity.

I'm so close to tears it's fucking sick. God. It's not even the stuff that happened in this chapter (although -of course- that contributed to it) it's that there isn't any more. For the past week or so, every moment I had of free time (which isn't a lot) was spent reading this blasted story. And now, you cut me off here. God. I can't function. I don't even know what I'm doing. When I was going through my normal, every day life, it was all made somehow better by the knowledge that I got to come home and read this. Now I can't. That's really depressing.

*sigh* Wow. Sorry. Not to get all melodramatic. I really didn't mean to sound... I don't know. Depressed and suicidal and stuff. I'm not... I'm just very, very caught up in your story. And extremely mad that I don't get to read the next chapter right now.

Just... update soon. Save my sanity.

INCREDIBLY SATISFYING YET DEVISTATINGLY NOT.

You're fucking unbelievable, you know that? I mean... you're incredible. Your writing astounds me. I can't even begin to form the words.

""You mean it, Granger," he repeated, "You mean all of it." Because that almost makes you even more beautiful. That belief. That faith. You keep it no matter what. Faith in doing the right thing, in believing that the right thing is out there to do. It makes you beautiful because I can taste those thoughts from you, Granger. It's almost purity. It's half-clean, tainted but real. It's what I'm feeding off. Drinking in. Like water."

"You've seen Draco Malfoy cry. Well congratu-fucking-lations. I hope it was a good show."

""And I'm a pureblood, remember? At least you don't have anything to worry about on that front."
Her expression cracked slightly.
Oh don't look so shocked. Did you think I'd forgotten? I was brought up to remember it before anything."

""Did anyone ever tell you that sarvasm just doesn't suit you, Malfoy?"
"Everything suits me, sweetheart."
"Don't call me sweetheart.""

"No.
And that was where her heart stopped.
That was where Hermione Granger finally realised the truth about herself. That she no longer told it.
That she was living a lie. Decorating tales and friends and lovers with them. Wasting and spitting on every moral code she had ever set about to uphold."

I can't even... phenomenal.

Well, I got to about chapter ten or so and had to stop reading because it's all a bit too... emo for me. Very angsty. Although you write angst extremely well! Even though I'm not in love with the story, you are a fabulous writer. I'll bet you make a great poet, because you write like one. Oh, and I love how you have this Mary Poppins bag of insults. Not one of them are the same! LOL Anyways, kudos on your writing!

chapter 18-

first off, id like to tell you that this is officially the best dramione on aff. I am dead serious.

second, right now, i think im gunna be sick. that ending killed me. i hope you update soon. or else i'll be completley pissed. i really have a stomach ache right now. that was insanley perfect.

third, i admire the way not once, NOT ONCE, were any of the characters... um... out of character. It is amazing that you have manage to litterally create the perfect story. you have truly redefined my definition of a good fanfic. (an amazing one, for that matter.)

also note: I LOVE YOU. obviously not that way, but you get the point. somehow, and i am not being over-dramatic, this story has changed my life.

yes, i might be insane. ya, just laugh at me, but I'm dead serious.

LOVE YOU, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
-Britt

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oh, how I love this story. "Water" The title is so pure, so perfect for this fic. You write amazing, and the details are superb. I hope if you could update a bit faster, though.
Anyway, congratulations and keep going. (Sorry for any grammar mistakes, but english is not my first language)