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for Water

by kissherdraco

person sonya
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is greayt but i feel like draco loves abusing hermione i want them to love each other and i hope that happens=)
person sonya
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nc
person Mindy
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story! I have to say, so far I'm ecstatic over how you've written this. I'm glad you haven't done the obvious and disappointing things so many authors might have done. Like have Harry believe Pansy and run and tell Hermione. Or have it take chapters and chapters before they realize it wasn't Harry forcing her. Even the conversation between Harry and Hermione after, when it's in the open at last. I think you're placing every bit of angst exactly where it should be. Your wording is spectacular. I can't wait to see how this ends. But the fact that it's one of the few stories I wish there were like 60 chapters of for me to read really says a lot. I'm definitely hoping for a happy ending, just not a cliched one. Keep up the good work.
person Brazilia
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwe i hope this isnt finished and your gonna update again soon
person kate
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just read it all, and its absolutely amazing, and realistic if that's possible with draco/hermione
well i hope you update it soon! and i feel sort of bad for Harry, but he's being really annoying...i can almost sense the harry/hermione coming up (maybe)
update!
~kate
person Shannon
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so I love you. That's it, the end. ^_^

I haven't finished reading the entire story; I had saved the first 17 chapters in a word document with hopes of rereading it all later because I skimmed the first time, but when I saw that there was a new chapter, I had to leave a comment and just tell you how amazing this story is. I absolutely hate it when people just have Hr/D fall in love like that *snaps fingers* and then live happily ever after. It's just not remotely possible. Your storyline could actually happen, and that's what makes it so damn good. *bows* You are ingenius. xD

Sincerely cannot wait for more!!!
person Phosphorus
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my fucking god. I love you. You're fucking brillant! This fic is incredible...
person shimmeree
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HI!

I just read this whole story over again! It took me all bloody day! And it was GREAT!

Just wanted to let you know. ;)
person Lyn
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read the whole thing and I have to say -DAMN you can write! I am seriously
in love here, I kinda feel like those wierd-ass groupie people who stand on the
sidelines and scream 'I want to have your baby!'. Look what you did to me and
apparently so many others. For shame.
--Take pity on us and update okay?


Lyn
person Lorn
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I know this is an angst fic, I get that. But please, if there's any mercy for these characters, let her love him too.
Lorn