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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'll never be the same, i'll tell you for sure!!!
GREAT SONG! If that's where you got the title from...eh, anyway, cool start. could use some betas though.
GREAT SONG! If that's where you got the title from...eh, anyway, cool start. could use some betas though.
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great job so far! keep updating! =o)
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*clears throat* HOT! That was awesome. I am definitely looking forward to reading more of this one. I am also available to be a Beta if you would like. I love to edit things. Shhh . . . don't tell anyone what a geek I am. Just let me know. Either way I will be keeping my eye on this one. It promises to be quite delicious if this start is anything to go by. :)
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for chapter 2!
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, very good way to get your readers attention :P
However, to separate your paragraphs, it may be good to leave a blank line, it'll make it easier to read...
Can't wait to read more,
Chow for now!
However, to separate your paragraphs, it may be good to leave a blank line, it'll make it easier to read...
Can't wait to read more,
Chow for now!
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, good start...I hope you carry on with this story and update soon *grins* and possibly with longer chapters....
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait for more! that was great!