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*eyes wide* Shit, who did he see? I doubt it was Ron and Hermione, I mean, there would have been a confrontation or somethingif that was the case. *tilts head* From his reaction it must have been really bad. *grin* Well!? Who was it!? More Please! ASAP!

Sorry I didn't review in the last chapter, its been a busy year! I love this story and can't wait for more of it!

I have a few problems with chapter five. You really screwed up your geography. The Three Broomsticks and The Hog's Head are both in Hogsmeade. The Leakey Coldren is the bar in Diagon Alley. You might want to go back and try to fix that. But I did like this chapter. Please tell me this is a Bottom!Draco and Dominant!Harry fic. It seems like it's leading in that direction, and I love it when Harry tops Draco. That was really hot when Harry approached Draco in that predetory saunter and whispered in his ear. Totally rocked my socks off, and then some. LOL!

Kyle

How could you stop there? OMFG! WTF!! You have to make your chapters longer. They are just too damn short. There, I said it. Your chapters are short and you need to lengthen them. I did like this chapter though. I was so ready for Harry to go back to his own compartment and go down on Draco, but sadly you just dropped it off. Shame...

Kyle

p.s. MAKE YOUR CHAPTERS LONGER!!! I feel like I barely get into them and then they are over. So update soon, and it better be long or you're going to get a nasty review from me. And I make grown men cry, so you better do as I say or else... LOL! J/k

Wow! Really great story. I really like this chapter. Of course, I know the letter came from Draco since this is a H/D fic. Can't wait to read chapter three, in fact, I'll do it now. LOL!

Kyle

Okay, just read chapter four and... HOW ON EARTH CAN THEY POSSIBLY GET TOGETHER IF YOU ARE MAKING THEM WRITE NASTY THINGS TO EACH OTHER?! Alrighty, I feel better now. LOL! Going to read the next chapter.

Kyle

I only come back to this site for this wonderful story :)
It makes my day when you update! Haha
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Great story!
I can't wait for the draco/harry :)

oooo harry's upset. This upset will just drive him straight into Draco's arms, won't it?

hey just wanna say great story so far and i'm looking forward to the harry/draco action :P

"He was going to get to the bottom of this" intentional pun? :D it made my perverted self laugh!

Poor Harry... No one to love him now. Any volunteers? Draco? Anyone? =o)

Please update soon.