rate_review Reviews

I like it. I don't have anything to say, I really like it. If You are asking me :You should continue.:)

I think you should continue... I really like it^^

This would make a very good prologue to something more complex. I'm intrigued by what you have written so far. Please continue

I liked it. It can be one-shot (a little sad one)... but if you are going to continue, I would like to read it! I hope for some better development, because I dont like very sad stories too much (my personal preferencies are good plot, maybe some pain, can be much pain, but then there has to be a happy end...). If it is a proloque, it can be very good - but please dont make it an end of your story...