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for Change Comes From Words

by Nik

person maria
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a very interesting letter. i would say that ron dying and harry reading the letter afterwards would be a interesting. but then again, a happy ending would be nice. how about ron's life flashing before his eyes. u no ron on the verge of death meanwhile, harry is reading the letter. he would rush to ron's side before its 2 late and ron pulls through when he somehow hears harry confess his feelings. but i dont no. wat do u think?
person Ari
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, nice fic! I loved it so much that I actually cried! If you continue this, I hope you choose #2 because I just looooove angst!!! XD
person T
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is good... Please continue! I like the sound of the first option better. But then again, I bet a lot of Harry/Ron shippers would. ^_^ I'll repeat: PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
person oddmonstergrrr
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
option #1! im a hopeless romantic! =P
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thats so sad! UPDATE!
person Green Jellybean
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done. :) As I was reading, I was picturing Harry having found the letter a year or so after Ron's death. When reading the beginning, when Ron talks about Harry only mourning him for a week, I imagined that as Harry read the letter he would still be in mourning. I think that you should definitely continue with this. Though, if you go with option 1, if it's not to much of hassle could you maybe plan out where the story is going before you start back up? It can be very irritating as a reading when a story dies in the middle because the author isn't sure where to go with it. Especially when it is well written and has a decent plot going. I look forward to reading more if you decide to continue...
person Siarra
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is brilliant. I can't believe it's your first HP fic...
I'd definitely love to see this continued, and preferably with the first option in which they get together. There's already so much angst in every other pairing so this one is a nice reprieve from all that, or at least that's my opinion. Plus, it would be a shame to let this wonderful, almost a character study -like revelation of Ron's thought and feelings go to waste. Your writing style is nice to read, and Ron's text is delightfully filled with emotions, something surprisingly difficult to manage well.
person LuneNightingale
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really really like how you did this story, or should I say letter? I would like even more to see Harry's reaction to it, or even what you'd choose to do with it from there. ^^ I'm a sap for fluff and angst... but with such a love like that, you can't help but wish Ron got to hold him at least once. ^_^ *chuckles* Beautifully done...
person kwala girl
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
1! 1! I pick 1!!!!!!!! I beg you to continue. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?
person -*-
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you sould have Harry and Ron get into a relationship......really good fic