rate_review Reviews

My main criticizm is the fact that you start with the letter instead of telling us how and when Harry aquired the letter... was it a mistake that Harry found it? or are you implying that Molly did as Ron suspected she would by giving Harry the letter she found under his pillow while collecting Ron's possession in her mourning of his death while clearing his room??

This could be a good several chapter story if you continue it with Ron still being alive and continuing on how Harry is coping with this revelation and what he intends to do about it and if and when they rid the world of voldemort, what will happen after. etc...

I reviewed in January, after 8 chapters, and have now caught up with the whole story, which was excellent: well done. So many of the HP stories on this site are frankly awful, full of mistakes, and poorly plotted; this was well-written, with a proper plot and good construction. I hope you post it on some of the "proper" Harry/Ron sites, as it's well up there with the best H/R fics.

I was sooo sooo happy to see this updated! And it's so sad that it's finally over! But it had a happy ending! This is definitely my favorite fic on the site that I've read. It's just so sweet! It melts your heart! You did a great job on this fic! Hopefully you write another one soon! I'd really love to read more of your work! Maybe you'll write more H/R fics! Those are my favs!

thats got to be one of the cutest, fluffiest and probably the best written ron/harry that i have ever read, i loved it, thanx for the great read, ella xxxxxx

oh gosh! that was beautiful!

*sniffle* Cried the last chapter through. LOVE IT! The Characters and the pairings and your style and the last battle. It's just per-fect. Thanks for sharing!

great story and i loved the particulary volient murdering of voldemort hehehe

that was the most beautiful story i have ever read...in the begining i cried, with fred and george i laughed, this story gives inspiration and i really think you should continue writing stories. u have a wonderful talent and i thank you for this story of love, compassion, tragedy and hope.

OMFG!! *fan-girl squealing*
that was awesome!! i can't wait for the epilogue and everything ^_^

That was the best!!! i loved the story. it was one of the best ive read in this site. i hope you write other stroies i look foward to reading them if you do.
Scarlett