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November 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon :)
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August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love vella stories. Please continue.
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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue the story i love Hermione/Draco stories
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
if you cant update offen post a lot....as soona s i post this...ok? ready...and....GO! POSTPOSTPOSTPOST!....where are the posts ? :(
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update when u can i like it
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story as quite a good beginning. There are a lot of spelling and the dreaded Grammar mistakes.
However there was also a lot of good points. I like the fact that LUCIUS is a spy already. That Narcissa
is caring, and your Dumbledore is a bit nutty.
Get a beta, or just someone to read through your chapter. Space to bars between paragraphs.
Harry Potter has a number of helpful, factual and spelling sites, my favourite is
http://www.hp-lexicon.org/index-2.html which should take you right to it. Floo powder and Flooing is the right spelling,
you see even reviewers can get it wrong.
Look forward to reading your next chapter.
However there was also a lot of good points. I like the fact that LUCIUS is a spy already. That Narcissa
is caring, and your Dumbledore is a bit nutty.
Get a beta, or just someone to read through your chapter. Space to bars between paragraphs.
Harry Potter has a number of helpful, factual and spelling sites, my favourite is
http://www.hp-lexicon.org/index-2.html which should take you right to it. Floo powder and Flooing is the right spelling,
you see even reviewers can get it wrong.
Look forward to reading your next chapter.
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
do us all a favour and burn your computer
if you dont wish to burn it i suggest you find a beta who can fix your errors. You have really bad spelling and Grammer.
What may i ask is a vella? I am sure you mean a veela
if you dont wish to burn it i suggest you find a beta who can fix your errors. You have really bad spelling and Grammer.
What may i ask is a vella? I am sure you mean a veela