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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love this-acn't wait for the next chapter!!
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter - can't wait for more!
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! This is such a cool story. The way that you write Snape is amazing. The storyline is great and makes more sense than most that I've read not to mention that it is extremely original and thought out. I love it and hope that you write more soon!!!
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if my last review went through, aff.net is being really weird at the moment... so sorry if I'm repeating myself! ^__^
Haha... I luv the whole Snape and the raspberry jam thing, it makes me laugh so much!! I can see him being silly in that sort of spiteful manner. Very good job on that. I luv a quirky Snape.
Very good story line, I really have no idea what to expect next!! And I love it when that happens. Bloody brilliant, even if there are bits that have mistakes... which is so easy to do. Sometimes the paragraphs are a little long, but I can deal with it!! I think it just comes down to preference, because when I write I always do small ones, whcih probably pisses some people off!! Oops!! But not to worry!!!
Good work, I'm really enjoying this! ^___^
Haha... I luv the whole Snape and the raspberry jam thing, it makes me laugh so much!! I can see him being silly in that sort of spiteful manner. Very good job on that. I luv a quirky Snape.
Very good story line, I really have no idea what to expect next!! And I love it when that happens. Bloody brilliant, even if there are bits that have mistakes... which is so easy to do. Sometimes the paragraphs are a little long, but I can deal with it!! I think it just comes down to preference, because when I write I always do small ones, whcih probably pisses some people off!! Oops!! But not to worry!!!
Good work, I'm really enjoying this! ^___^
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's an interesting fic - can't wait for the rest!
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June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your making quite a secret of that all.
Hell, what is that bird aiming at?
You know, I am not one to review - normally - but I have started recently to do so.
I will track this story down to its very end. *grin*
But there\'s one thing - please don\'t get me wrong:
I know you want to update your story as soon as possible and your readers appreciate this,
but
please just read through it once before posting. I myself suffer from the \'hit-the-wrong-key-syndrom\' so I have
to reread everything I write and check for simply wrong typed letters. (A pain in the ass - forgive my choice of word)
It is not meant to offend you, but you surely know yourself that it\'s easier to engross yourself in a story if you don\'t stimble iver
rong ltters (see what I mean?)
(I think someone had to tell you - now that was my turn)
Feel free to e-mail me: RobinRick@gmx.de
or just comment with your next update
Thanks
Hell, what is that bird aiming at?
You know, I am not one to review - normally - but I have started recently to do so.
I will track this story down to its very end. *grin*
But there\'s one thing - please don\'t get me wrong:
I know you want to update your story as soon as possible and your readers appreciate this,
but
please just read through it once before posting. I myself suffer from the \'hit-the-wrong-key-syndrom\' so I have
to reread everything I write and check for simply wrong typed letters. (A pain in the ass - forgive my choice of word)
It is not meant to offend you, but you surely know yourself that it\'s easier to engross yourself in a story if you don\'t stimble iver
rong ltters (see what I mean?)
(I think someone had to tell you - now that was my turn)
Feel free to e-mail me: RobinRick@gmx.de
or just comment with your next update
Thanks
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June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay I don\'t know if that came out right.
I am just too honest for my own good
Therefor I have to tell you that I think you know where you are heading and
that I envy you for being such an inventive and fast writer
I am just too honest for my own good
Therefor I have to tell you that I think you know where you are heading and
that I envy you for being such an inventive and fast writer
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June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!
I love your Severus
When (not if) will Harry come to realise the truth?
And, since it\'s HP/SS, who will start when to get to the other?
I am looking forward to reading more
I love your Severus
When (not if) will Harry come to realise the truth?
And, since it\'s HP/SS, who will start when to get to the other?
I am looking forward to reading more
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very original. I've never read a fic like this one before. Please update soon! The mystery is killing me!!! (even if it is really, really good!)
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the start to this story. I amlooking forward to see where it will go. And how long it will take them to find the "lost Raven."