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Oh, it's this story that could not get any more perfect. I really liked it: the hesitancy, the clever and totally canon device of the Truth Toffee. Very good example of fusing the magical Potterverse into fanfic! I thought the dialogue was well-paced, and very in-character, not sentimental but full of caring and affection. Ron's PoV was tight and well-executed, and so was Harry's; you moved between the two PoVs back to omniscient author very smoothly, with unnoticeable transitions. A great work! Thanks!

Can't help thinking, Malfoy doesn't have a leg to stand on - after all, *his bodyguards* Crabbe and Goyle went to the ball together. In canon. It's right there in GoF. Crabbe/Goyle=OTP! ;)

Loved it, especially since the reader is as bewildered as Ron as to what is happeneing until almost simultaneously (at least for me), we remembered the toffees from the twins. Figures those rascals would pull something like that! :-)

Aww... This left me with a warm and fuzzy feeling, just like you said in the summary. ^_^ I love this!!

Lovely, well done. There seems to be prejudice against Harry/Ron in much fanfic, so the more the better. Perhaps a follow-up with more adventurous sex?

perfect!
it was sweet and well-written and, and...just perfect! lol...i loved it!

Nothing wrong with a piece of beautifuly written fluff now and again. :-) Also love your use of the twins here, as instigators of Harry/Ron fun through their practical jokes.

Awww! This was so cute, I loved it!