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for Demonic

by CruentoYmber

person angelus
schedule March 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update your chapters please
person jw
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story hopr to read more soon
person jw
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story hopr to read more soon
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 3! The spider can turn human? Holy moly! Can't wait for more!
person mythice
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow i like the twist you have in this story. a little more flash back would be much help understanding the storie though.
person Anon
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chap update soon!
person angelstarfire
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome... a new twist for an aging topic. I really like the plot... spiders... :P No wonder he didn't become friends with Ron! lol... I can't wait for your next chapter!!
person Ryandais
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
This is grat. I want to rad whats going to happen next. Please hurry up. I like the whole Spider thing that you used in the story... very interesting...
person Night Shade
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh, very nice. please update soon.
person LadyX
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o heu there! this looks very interseting! i hope you updsate it soon! cant wait for more!i think this just might look even better than fiendish...feels like there are too many peeps in that one that are related...hope you continue this!