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for Bleed Me An Ocean

by CerberusSky

person yoblossom
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha, a Puppy Pond. ^^ Hermione shouldn't forgive Ron and spred it around what he did. Loved the chapter. can't wait until the next one!
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So now she knows! I'm glad. Maybe she can help them. These dreams. Harry needs to tell someone. Anyone. Need chapter 25!
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Rock on hermione! nice chapter, I really love how Draco just doesnt give a Damn, I love wolves too so that was a fantastic move to have one in the fic (in my view) I cant wait t see what Hermione has planned.
~Kira Feles.~
person Karen
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, wasn't me who first reviewed about your german, but yeah. Ein Bissen is double s, or one of those weird B things. Dreizehn was spelt right though! Good chapter! Can't wait to see what you come up with next.
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 24! That dream worries me!
person Alison
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw!! I want a pup-wolf!!! Great chapter, can't wait for an update! =o)
person kati.e
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww. This chapter was so adorable.
person acheron33
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have been following ur story, all n all i find it's quite good, i do believe there is somethin lacking in this last chapter, n its not smut, prolly something along the lines of more deepnes into harry fears about the dream, maybe more internal conflict would do?
person Jake
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww I love wolves. Filch is such an ass.
person songbird
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, you can speak German? Nice.
Then I can write my reviews in German from now on...
Ich fand's echt gut und der Wolf war ja zuuuu s