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for Bleed Me An Ocean

by CerberusSky

person Vera Lynn
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked chapter 20.
I really like this whole Wolf's Maw pub thingy.
And that Hermione is friends with Harry again! Yay!
But.. Draco bottomed.. Again.. Gag.
Sorry. I just wont be able to let this go!
But, I still love the story.
Off to read more now!
- Bridget.
person Master Tim
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, VERA!

Draco is nothing more than a BOTTOMING LITTLE FUCKING BITCH!

Get over it.
person Master Tim
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, the story is good, all of it... well.. except for the boy sex stuff. (Not that it isn't good, I just don't like to read it.)

Well, let me get right to the point. The story rocks, now... for some other news;
Personally, I think the war should be nuclear and everybody should FUCKING DIE!

Oh, by the way... you gotta kill some people in the book. :D That always makes for a happy ending in my point of view!
person insane songbird
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, if my brain isn't frozen by the chilly temperatures here *woudn't wonder if it was* I couldn't wright my review yet because my internet committed suicide after I read the last chapter.
I'll hand it in now!
So, Mione knows... I've been waiting for this some time and I doubt they could have hidden it any longer. she's just too clever. So it's no surprise she already has a plan. I'm waiting for it.
She just needed to love Dreizehn, who coudn't?
We'll see how she will make Harry listening to her...
CU, birdie
person Gaia
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chs 1-15 review...hey, i just wanted to tell u that i wasn't xpecting a 'miricle cure' 4 Draco's problems, thats y they're PROBLEMS, they dont go away like that. i used to cut and even though ive stopped 4 a while (4-6 months or so...)i still feel an almost over-whelming need 2 do it again sometimes. i just thought u might wanna noe that ur portrayal of Draco's behaviors was very realistic. he was depressed without being suicidal as many ppl make cutters sound. i also like that Draco views his scars as testiments of his love, it IS like that.
ur doing a very good job with this fic
person RD Wind
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I started reading your story yesterday when I needed a break from mine. There is just something to be said for a slash story ** SIGH**

What I can say about yours is this -- PLEASE don't stop. It's a good story, a solid story line and amazing reality in a world of make-believe!

Will continue to read, perhaps lurk a bit... but don't stop.

--RD
person TabooDesire
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWW THEY GOT A WOLF!!! And Hermione found out! She really should mind her own business, though. She's in no place to talk seeing as everything they've been through because of Ron and in the beginning she just sat and watched.
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Their alchoholism was building to a noticable point, I suspected others would become involced soon. Leaves me wondering if they'll listen until something utterly tragic happens....hmmmm. Still. top rate!
person kati.e
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Curious about Hermiones plan, Ihope it's nothing bad.
person Banner
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you aren't just magickly making it all better.