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for Bleed Me An Ocean

by CerberusSky

person kati.e
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it <3
person evila
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh finally an update !!
that was cool... please please please write more ! its time for some big drama !!
person DN
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter, but I wish things would start to lighten up for everyone in the story. Regardless, this is a great story, and I am looking forward to the next update. DN.
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, i'm seriously enthralled with your story, here. I absolutely love it! i can't wait until the next chapter. plezse hurry!
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for chapter 27! Will Severus go easy on him? Bet Filch won't.
person Rain
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you are fabulous, you really know what you are talking about and your story is very well written. ;) Thank you.
person Master Tim
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First:

Vera, stupid people don't deserve opinions. That means none for you. If you can't read between the lines and figure out "why" Draco is portrayed as a bottoming bitch, then you need to read more "non-fiction" stories and stay out of the "realistic fiction". Wait, my mistake... you're not stupid, you're ignorant (and maybe stupid as well, but who's counting?)

Second:

Sam, people that steal ideas, concepts, plots, events, etc. are pathetic. It's amazing how someone can be under the opinion that it's okay as long as they change it around a little. Stealing is stealing, especially in writing. But thanks for informing us all that you're a skilled plagarist. Even if you were the greatest writer in the world, I would not read your shit... because if you stole any part of it then all that is connected to that stolen portion is shit, even if it's well written shit. I don't read shit.

Third:

Cerberus_Sky, this was an awesome chapter. I must say I think this chapter was the best so far. It had me on the edge of my seat waiting to see the outcome. It was brilliantly written and the content was great. I had hoped the chapter might contain something similar but you far exceeded my expectations. Keep writing. Also, people attempting to emulate your work may be a compliment in some ways, it's fucking pathetic in all the rest. You're better than that, you're original and I love to read your work. Hopefully it'll be finished by the time I leave for Russia next weekend. If not, I'll try to read whatever you post while I'm there, but I can't guarantee it. Please, keep it coming. Oh, and... I still want to fuck Hermione.
person Jake
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I'm really tired but you said you wanted a review and I love you sooo.....yea. I beg u to update soon.

Jake
person chloe rigley
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! that was so amazing i loved that chapter and i love your writing. i hope that ron dies because that is what he deserves and that harry doesnt get expelled. please update soon.
person Samayel
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, love the last most recent chapter. The rising tide of tension is starting to break and crash like a wave. It leaves me desperate to see how the 'Ron as complete nemesis' angle will pan out. Not to mention the few hundred other questions that pop to mind but will only be answered by patience and reading! And as for getting the dander up for plaigarists, sod 'em! Sides, theres a good chance someones similar fic was just Draco as a cutting addict story that someone might not have had the urge to try if the subject hadn't been broached so skillfully and passionately here. Remember love, imitation is the sincerest for of flattery, and good artists don't borrow, they steal. Hell, I may use different phrases and sentence structure, but I steal a good concept or two from some of the things that moved me most. Especially Storm Constantines Wraeththu Trilogy. I may nab a stray bit here and there, but I always recommend to people that they find a copy and buy it...the prose is worth every penny. I'll be watching for more, always a fan...M