Reviews for Bleed Me An Ocean - Harry Potter

person DN

schedule March 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Great to see you updating again, and haven\'t lost your touch. I can\'t wait to see what will happen to lucious, and how Ron and Harry are going to get along. Keep up the good work and again, great to see you updating again. DN.

person Lilliputian722

schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Just finished reading what you've got posted on this story. To say that it's awesome is an understatement. The quality, not to mention the quantity, of your writing is exceptional. I hope that you continue once the site is back up and running.
Can't wait to see where you take Ronald (the world's biggest wanker) next. He's turned into the hideous little nightmare that one could have envisioned Draco becoming before his descent.
Harry is pretty sensational in your tale. Love his compassion and lust for Draco and how while he's darn powerful as a wizard, he's still easily led astray as a man (whiskey).
Draco is my favorite in this story, though. I love his pain. I think everyone of us can relate to his demons in some way. Mine are not as severe as his, but others may certainly relate to his deeper degree of despair.
Only, I am with Harry on the cutting. It's time for Draco to understand how much it hurts the other person to see you do that to yourself. I think the next time Harry catches Draco cutting himself, Harry needs to, in a fit a rage, snatch the blade away and slash himself. Then, maybe, Draco would see how the other side of that fence feels.

~Cant wait for more,
Stephanie

person leena

schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM

i've probably said this before but oh my god! angsty draco is the sex!!!

"For two years now he had been slicing himself open, trying to determine the nature of his flaw"
freakin lovely!

person Master Tim

schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Vera, insulting you doesn't do anything for me, nor does it have a negative impact on me. I do this merely to try to help you improve yourself. I call it constructive criticism ringing lightly with sarcasm. My "theory" isn't a theory, it's merely an observation made by reading the story and understanding what I've read. That, Darling, is called comprehension. If you comprehend what you read, then you don't make assumptions or develop theories, you simply know what's going on in the plot based on the information you've been given by the writer. I think the writer has made it more than clear in defining why Draco is the "Bottom" in this relationship. Also, if you're going to comment on stories (any stories at all) you should keep in mind that they're generally written using proper spelling, grammatical skills, and punctuation. Perhaps you should study more about these as well. You've misspelled "there" (it should be their) and "aloud" (should be allowed), and too many grammatical errors to list.

Cerberus, I totally agree that this story is coming along wonderfully, I think that the characters in the story have really had their plates full with the last few chapters and this little rest was just want they needed. The only thing I can think that might help them along a little more is to get the opportunity to vent their frustrations. This chapter still leaves the story open for so many directions and I think it works perfectly. I also feel that I have to say, "I love the last lyrical line in the paragraph, it fits so well." Keep the words flowing, I'll be sure to catch up on anything I miss when I get back from Russia at the end of the month.

person songbird