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O stupid ron!! please let hermione begin to understand!! it would be great for harry to at least have one of his best friends with him! i cant wait for the next chapter =o)

i didn't understand at first why draco didn't stop drinking, but now i do. and i like it that you put some realisticness into your story. it makes it more believable. very nice.

This story is absolutely amazing, and i deeply love your descriptions and understanding of emotional nature. This is a truly beautiful piece, and i can not wait for the next update.
Sincerely,
Draven Wolfe (a.k.a Crowley, on AFF)

Man! THAT WAS SO SAD! Seeing all of them betray him like that! Another great chapter!

loved the update !

It is very realistic that their friends haven't accepted them immediatly.
Yeah, Ron is an asshole.

Oh MY GOD.. You just gave me my christmas present with this line: "But here's some news: this is MY life, my choices and my love. Not yours. YOU DO NOT RUN ME, NOR DO YOU MAKE UP MY MIND FOR ME. This what I want. So. Piss. Off."
Oh, i almost had an orgasm when i read that big words part!! I think you should e-mail that very line to Rowling to get her back on the track (ok.. that was mean.. but i HATED the fifth and sixth books...). Cause... well.. harry can't even breath in a diferent way that the whole wizarding world is agains him.. and he just takes it all! He doesn't say anything!! But you saved me from my agony.. Oh, i loved that line so muuuuuuuuchhhhh. I love you for giving me that!.

This attitude from Harry is almost never seen in fanfictions.. he just sulks like he do in the books.. That's so annoying!! He is not Jesus Christ for god's sake!! Oh.. did i already say i love you?? And that i love this fic???????????
HUGS!! And Merry Christmas. (i'll wish you a happy new year on the next review since you HAVE to update before that. Pretty please?)

Ps: You forgot to have harry saying just one thing when Ron said "Take your bitch and never, ever speak to me again.". Harry murmured "fuck you". I swear i heard it... I think Draco heard too, you should ask him. Bye!!

i totally understand that of course Draco couldnt just stop drinking, he might be able to stop cutting easier though since he didnt seem to be quite so dependant on it. i congratulate you, you have managed to capture the whole mind set without making it completly unrealistic, "Ah i want to die" sort of idiocy which some people are so fond of. Anyway, i hope hermione goes on their side, i think maybe she will be one of the first to turn back to them and get them accepted or something, but then its your story so you can do as you like. As for Ron, bad bad girl, you've actually made me hate Ron and i loved ron, look what you've done to me, very bad girl i tell you. Anyway aside from that, this is a brilliant story, please do continue, i hope you get a warm glow from this review because i dont always review but for you ... i am!!! lol!!!
Have a bloody good christmas and dont forget us whilst you're eating turkey, unwrapping presents and everything else, miss sad girl sitting here typing will be waiting for updates from all her favorites!!! hint hint!!!

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This line, "If only he had looked more closely while his eyes had roved the room in his quiet struggle, he would've noticed the footprints in the thick dust. Footprints that he would've known did not belong to him." really made me happy. It gives a mysterious feeling x3 the plot here's good and the vocabulary and speech used in it fits perfectly. Again, it gives the tale a quiet, angsty feeling. LOL
ill shaddap and congratulate you instead, HOORAY =D
ps: (goes off to read the next chapter)

I love this!! Please let Hermione come around though, she is so smart. She can open her mind and see that Draco has been suffering! Please... I hate when she is too bigoted or holds a grudge, its so not Hermione.

Well, I'm glad you didn't take the easy way out - it's not so easy to just give up drinking, even when you really want to...and Draco won't be able to until he decides to do it for himself; wanting to do it for Harry won't work in the long term...great job with this story!