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for Bleed Me An Ocean

by CerberusSky

person anne
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM

aww! i totally love your fic! harry and draco are so right for each other. update soon please?! and more smut :D
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I wish they could run away too. Need chapter 18!
person Caits
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. You know, this is the first fic on this site that I've fallen in love with enough to review. I think you've got a true talent as an author, and I really hope you pursue that. The world needs more excellent writing. :)
I was sort of curious, though, as to whether you've had any kind of experience with the issues Draco's facing. Because for a good long while there, I was into the cutting and, more recently, the drinking - and I've tried to explain it, but it's hard for other people to understand what's going on. And in Chapter 15, when Draco's trying to answer the hardest question - "why?" - it all. just. Guh. *incoherency* I really, really loved the words you used for his explanation; especially "because nothing hurts like empty". I don't know - but whenever I read something so REAL, it hurts a little bit in places I can't describe.
I guess I just wanted to say thank you for writing this and making it viable. Looking forward to reading more!

Caits
person chloe rigley
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a wicked chapter. i like drunk harry and draco...so funny
person Joanna
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter...what the saying 'If you can't cure them join them????" or did i just make that up...lol. Well even if i did, it seems that is what Harry is doing. He cant stop Draco from drinking, so he is joining him
person cyn
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome again, love. I screamed at Harry, but I totally understood. Sometimes you just have to join in...
person bb
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked it. I think it was sweet in a weird way and sad. Ron is an ass.
person Ali
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written, i'm shivering with excitement for the next chapter...
person Fefs
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello. This chapter was amazing. It showed us their love so well.. and how bad the situation really is. I hope this happy ending you mentionet doesn't include that fucker Ron just saying he is sorry and everything is ok. Hermione too.. that bitch.. some friends they are.
I wish i could see Voldemort torturing every student on the school.. They would be begging for the boy who lived in no time... Fuckers..
I'm so irritated!!! But i'm in love with this fic. =D It really touches me, you know?

Just one thing: Isn't Harry too accepting of Draco's drinking problem? He just lets Draco get smached every single moment... That doesn't seem what a person that love the other would do.
person Heidi
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My first review to this fic. I really like it so far, looking forward to the next chapters. Harry really needs to get Draco detoxicated soon, which probably means he have to lock him up without any access to alcohol for some days, and just ride it out with him. Not much else to do in these cases I'm afraid, but maybe u have a better twist to the situation? Can't wait to find out :-)