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i loved it
hottness:P
but i must say i like may other readers r... desturbed with the drinking
but then again
what in life isnt disturbing?
so i c where ur coming from
i hope that by writing this that u get something out of it
maybe even help with ur addictions
we can only hopw
tho there is a reason they r called addictions
anyway
i wish u luck
ive been there and it takes alot
back to not being so personal with u
im looking forward to how they can over come their addictions
...and if they do
thanx for spending the time to write this

Hi... It's my first review to this fic because I just came over it and read the whole 20 chapters in one.
I have to say, that I really like the story, so don't let yourself go crazed by any reviewer who doesn't know what he's talking about. Not that I knew... *shrugs*
I like you being a realist because even though it's just fic it should still be at least believable! And it is, you do a good job. I'm content, that you know what you're talking about. And though Harry is getting an alcoholic (I see, that it is nearly impossible to stay sober while your partner is drunk all the time *nods*) there is eome progress, we (the readers) have to see: He's not cutting since they are together! And that's really positive, I hadn't expected that to be so constantly. (Well, he gt's his pain in a little more enjoyable way...)
To cure an addiction takes its time! So I'll give you all the time you think is needed because everything else would be ridiculous. And I'm waiting for Hermione to see what they are doing and start to set up the first AA-meeting at Hogwarts *g*
Write on, I'm excited to read the next chapter and don't listen to any flames, ok?
Bye, Read you soon, songbird.

oh my god, your story is so good! please update soon!!

You are still doing an AWESOME job. Granted it is starting to hit close to home and become more angsty than I like, BUT I know that it all fits in with the story. I am not going to leave you. Just sitting on the outside you want to cry and say, "Don't you see what you are doing?" and then there is the part of you that is saying, "You have been there, too. Hindsight is 20/20."

So, in other words, you are doing an amazing job capturing both of them and making it very realistic. If Draco had been cured overnight I would have been a bit upset. I am now at the point of waiting for the two of them to sober up and for Harry's feelings to still be there and Draco questioning what they are suppose to do together while they are sober, since the drinking seems to be the one thing that they have in common. Granted, the clubbing is awesome, but falls under drinking. I hope that just made sense.

Damn......................

Thats all that needs to be said, that was awesome...

Thanks for the message, but don't worry about it in the future. When I read I tend to predict what comes next. It's something I'm trying to teach my students. I'm a little worried. Like that voice in Harry's hear, I'm worried he's becomming an alcoholic. I'm sorry if real life intrudes into the fantasy of Fan Fic, but they are wasting the chances they have to have controll over their lives when they "grow up" and leave school. Plus long-term, alcoholics make lousy lovers because they can't "get it up!" How are you going to knock some sense into those boys???? Just because Draco's dad fu**ed up his childhood doesn't mean he has to suffer the rest of his life for it! It looks like no one is taking any interest in what is happening to these two students. I would like my fantasy world to be a little less like reality, please. Is everyone too busy dealing with daily crap to see what's happening to them too???

Happy new year to you too.

I keep reading this fic, even though it upsets me everytime. I suppose I'm pretty straight laced in that I don;t do drugs and never have, don't self harm and see no attraction in it and only drink at most once or twice a week in a party sort of atmosphere, and I rarely get drunk. Therefore many aspects of this fic unsettle me just a little, and upset me quite a bit. It's the way you write them with such depth and honesty and background knowledge that seems to upset me more, I tinkj, and the deep sense of despondency and 'getting by by barely living' that hangs around in the atmosphere of this fic really drags you in.

After chapter nineteen yesterday, I had to have a drink XD Well, a few actually XD

But I keep reading this fic, even though in parts it seems heavily reliant on lyrics or petnames or sheer emo-ness which are a little offputting, because, most of the time, this is a worthwhile story to read, well written and moving and genuine.

I hope for more, and hope for some light in the dark soon ^^ And I hope this didn;t sound like an appeal to stop writing, or a flame, because it just isn;t that at all ^^

xx Tsx xx

I'm glad they had a great time. I worry about them both being alcoholics. Can't wait for chapter 21!

Firstly I want to tell you how much i LOVE this fic! Submissive Draco is soooo HOT! HEHEHE *slaps self* ok... i'm calm...

secondly, I hope the boys have a happy ending! i've noticed that you've kinda made draco bery weak willed meaning that he gets obsessed or addicted to things very easily, whether it be pain, alcohol or sex. I'm guessing this is because of his father mistreating him for so long and breaking his spirit. I'm also guessing that because of how much Harry loves Draco he is strongly influenced by draco's actions hence the drinking... so on this note i am absolutely begging you yo update really quickly because i am hooked! will harry become draco? will draco be able to control his addictions (it really pisses me off when people say cured! how the fuck to you cure an addiction? I used to self harm to the point where i would black out everyday, just because i haven't done that in over a year doesn't make me cured or an ex-self harmer it just means I have taken back control!-- sorry read so many fics where someone is self harming and then they magically get better and never do it again that im used to giving rewoews that say 'and now where is the flying pig?')

Lastly, *big hugs* HAPPY NEW YEAR! *more hugs* YOU'RE A FAB WRITER, HUN! *HUGE HUG*

Luv

ST

^_^

Hermione was too pushy. But I'm happy that she came around. Happy New Year!