rate_review Reviews

just a quickie...loved it

To start with,
THAT WAS SO COOL! You can really write and continue with what you're doing. i dont know what else to say.
Ummmm.... can u help me, i need some ideas, but the story really tore me away from reality and i felt as if i was there. When i saw the title, i was interested, and started to read the first few paragraphs. i hope that one day i could write as good as u. my favorite part is when malfoy and harry were in the train and he saw the scars. it showed me that harry had feelings for draco from the begining. You are a great writer, and the fic is great. Very interesting

Aww. They made up. I don't know if I would have done the same thing. Harry's a good man. I wonder where they're going. I hope like...somewhere naughty. Like a bondage club.

Good chapter . plz update soon :):D

I don't really see there a reason why you should have to defend your story so much. actually I think your reasoning is quite logical and I like your view which is indeed quite realistic and not so desperately moralistic. just keep up your work, most of the ones that critizcise you are most probably too young or too sheltered to know what you are writing about.

OMG!!!!!!!! Okay I just read all of that at once which is why I never reviewed before and it was realy awsome!! so wow, lol, speachlees and i think ill re-read it...well see but yeah fucking great job!! keep it up. realy need more.
lol.

I say write whatever feels best. I agree that i dont really like the thought of Harry falling into the same bad habits as Draco, but i understand why youv'e done it and the importance and relevanve it has with the text and the characters. I like your story, and i like how youre not smoothing over the affects of alcohol as a drug, an addictive drug to placate your readers. Like you said if they dont like it, why keep reading it? I think it's cause your a really good writer, and their so engaged with the plot that they have to keep reading. Dont take all the reveiws on the subject as critisim, some are just people expressing their veiws on the subject and giving you feed back that you want.
When it comes down to it, you have the power, it's your story to write however you want.

I on't know what people have been saying about your writing, but I really like the whole realism of it all. I understand about the whole partner becomes alcoholic too thing because my sister is engaged to a man who used to be, and they've both said to me so many times that it was so difficult facing it for the both of them, because when my sister's fiance was tempted to drink, my sister would too, but then he got help and now he's off it and making his way back to recovery. He has had a few relapses since then, and belive me, he's been in so much pain and anger because of them, and my sister has really helped him through it all.

It so good that you can put real life experiences into your writing, and it often does tend to improve it. If someone who didn't have an alcoholic background tried to write this story, it'd probably turn out to be over exaggerated and in a bad light, when the way you've written it is so true and isn't at all like "they had drank so much that they passed out. When they woke up, they drank again" you go into a much deeper level of it, and I love how you've made us see how Harry is slipping, when he doesn't realise it himself. It amkes me start to wonder which one of them's gonna save who. But now you've got Hermione back in there....who know??

amazing. this really is a veerrrry good story. i love how real you are making it. please continue to update! don't listen to stupid mean reviewers that judge you. i think this story is going very well, so keep up the great work!! and happy new year

:)

Certainly not a bondage club but hot! That sex scene really was unreal. Can you consider them going to a bondage club in later chapters? It really would be awesome.