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for Bleed Me An Ocean

by CerberusSky

person insane songbird
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I don't know, why my e-mail is hidden, but I'll just give it here, so if you want to say anything about my reviews, like "Shut up!" (because I've got the habit of reviewing every time something new is up for the German page I'm reading has reviews on every single chapter...), or want anything else, it's just an offer.
katharina.laber@t-online.de
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, well the only thing that I noticed missing was that they didn't let Dreizehn outside to go to the bathroom. other than that, amazing chapter!
person yoblossom
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter. very nice


love the wolf
person kati.e
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved the updates !

Iwouldn't listen to people that say your story needs to be kitch, cheesy and typical. Your story is unique because it deals with 'angsty' issues and you aren't afriad to be realistic. Of course I am however hoping for a happy ending, and also wishing that they never break up. Yay.
person Kailey
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*wide eyes* you are truly my hero. i am in awe of your masterfulness. i started reading this pretty late in the evening (like 11 30 ish) and i just finished it (3 38) and i just couldn't stop reading. its enthralling and truly addicting. i was a bit apprehensive at first but i quickly warmed up and i enjoy every word that dances on my screen. i'm not the only loyal fan you have, i'm sure, but i feel as though somehow i am in connection with you. Maybe, somewhere in my addled and sleep-deprived mind (dear gods, i just realized that i have school to go to in little more than 24 hours) i found something in you that i was lacking? Strength, maybe, i don't know. I've done my own writing for fan fics but i never really showed them to people. please keep up the good work. Oh..and sorry for the length and annoyingness (at least i think it sounds annoying) of this review. can't wait to see the next chapter

~Kailey
person songbird
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He really deserves it! Ron is such a lttle bastard...
I can't understand how Mione can still be takling to him. I would be so ashamed of having any relationship to him, that I had to die in an instant!
It's so good to see Dray havin his head making up some nice little surprices for Ronny... I love him!
How for god's sake did they manage sleeping on the floor for Weeks or months... I'd be dead... just thinking of it is enough
person venom
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
before you mentioned the song title at the end of the fic, i was going to suggest you take that part of the chapter out and make it a one-shot songfic to "Closer"
lol
love it so far
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 23! I hope they remember to clean the sheets before they sleep in their new bed. You never know what Ron might have done in it.
person anjellic
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was fuckin awesome. Wonderful chapter...and great idea to switch the beds...I think I even did a Malfoy smirk lol! Can't wait to read the next chap!
person yoblossom
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha, oh that fucker got what was comin' to him!