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for Transfiguration of the Heart

by Losille

person amsev
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice so far -- love how you're building the tension up between Severus and Hermione -- AND throwing Victor into the mix.
person JTBJAB
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I loved it!
person firewall
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 7 - Nicely done. The introspection of Hermione was well written and the arrival of Tonks and Remus leave us hanging wanting more from Snape. Looking forward to the nest update.
person ShilohDarke
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I hung on your every word. I have enjoyed it very much and I do hope to read more soon!
person Bree
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I absolutely love it! Please keep us updated!!!
person Edania
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update!
person JTBJAB
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter - what torture you are putting Severus through! I look forward to your next chapter!
person slinki
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"kosher"? I'm not sure, but I think you're using that word wrong. might want to look into that.
person firewall
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 6 - What a great chapter. Snape's point of view throughout the chapter was the way to wirite it. It gave us a clearer understanding of his feelings/dilemma than anything else could.

Nicely written.
person JTBJAB
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe! Brilliant! Please update soon!