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for Transfiguration of the Heart

by Losille

person 0blivion
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i cant even tell you how addicted i am to this fic! please continue!!
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person mk
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very enjoyable snape/hermoine story so far. the only problem w/ aff, is that you can't ever tell how long ago something was written. it could be the last chapter was written last week, or last year.

well, I am enjoying your story and hope to see more added to it in the future.
happy writing.
mk
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Bek Allen
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! Please update soon! I've just foregone sleep to finish reading these fifteen, wonderful chapters. You had me absolutely hooked within the first three paragraphs that I had to read to see what happened. I can't wait to see Viktor and Minerva's responses... and Snape and Hermione's for that matter.

Please update soon as possible, I really would like to see how this all ends up.

Bek
person lemonade
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Actually, if she doesn't want Victor, I could take him off her hands.... ;D

Well, it looks like she has a chance with Severus, as unlikely as it seems. He's quite the challenge. Hope he offers her something warm to wear. Maybe like his sheets.
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'm going to sound like an obsessive freak but here goes... That's IT??? GAH! That just whetted my appetite for an update. All kidding aside I am still very intrigued to see how this unfolds.

Here's the constructive criticism: I noticed several spots where the autocorrect in Word fixed a misspelling and inserted the wrong corrected word. A quick read through (5 minutes tops) will fix the problem.

I impatiently await further installments in this very engaging series.
person Shanastay
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading your entire fic in one sitting. I consider myself a rather harsh critic, but other than the occasional typo (we ALL have them) I found nothing worth criticizing. Excellent story. Very well written and clearly thought out. I am especially impressed by the evolution of the central relationship as it is utterly believable. Bravo! Thank you for taking the time and effort to grace us with your talent. I certainly hope you have not given up on this story. I will keep checking back for updates. Happy writing!
person Evelynn
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job so far! I can't wait for the next update!
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing. I'm not sure who she'd be better off with, actually. I usually don't like Victor ... too neaderthal for me ... but he's becoming quite a sympathetic character in your hands. Great story. Can't wait for an addition.