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for My Unintended

by sageofsin

person Tyrisha
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mwhahahahahahahah. that was too fabulous. so great. unintended indeed. but hey, it worked! and fred and george's comments were outrageous as always
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person zer0
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol lol lol ...what a great fic..jus please please continue}!!!! don
person ice owl
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so cute! You and your chocolates was almost as inspired as fragonknight01's description of Lucius begging lemon drops.
Loved the Christmas expectations!!!
person Akume
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was just too much. ~laughs uncontrollably~ I loved the last bit with the wailer. Anyway, I hope you add another chapter to this splendid story. There's just so much you can do, but that just me wanting to read more smut between Lucius and Harry. Thanks again.
person yoblossom
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ I LOVED IT!!