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for My Unintended

by sageofsin

schedule August 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
aaargh come on, evil you for stopping there, this was so bloody funny
person GellyBelly
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story. You should make a sequel or something yeah???
person kimmie-jean
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it update
person sethian
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should post another chapter for it is quite a good story In my opinion. :)
person Heather
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn I want more...what happens? Please let me know when you update. Lotslove18@yahoo.com
person Eci_frog
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Just wished it were more.
person Nitasha (nitashasarin@hotmail.com)
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A bit confusing as you never really described or indicated what the result of the chocolates really was. Lucius finds Harry attractive but what happens when the potion wears off? Did you mean that Lucius already found Harry attractive and the potion just gave him a kick in the right direction and hence no further explanation towards the chocolates?

Sorry if I confused you.
person lusiki
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is there more to be expected?????
It was great , but a second chapter of nice lucius harry is allways a pleasure!!!! ^__^!
Lucius
person Briarrows69
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sequel? Second chapter? Maybe?
It's great as a one shot, but it would be interesting not to mention angsty when Harry finds out that Lucius ate the chocolate...and besides, I want a declaration of love, dammit!
person bella
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely little fic! Could you consider writing a sequel? Maybe a X-mas scene? and more HP/LM smut.... =) Good work! LOved the ending...