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for On a Night Like This

by Luxy

person Sea
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that's a cliffhanger! Looking forward to the resolution of your story, nicely done!
person Sea
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story. It's an interesting perspective and hope you update soon!
person Newtype
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet chapter, I await more please!
person Newtype
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet adition, I found going back adn forth hard to remember next time try differn text or going bold then not, but otherwise I adored the chapter it cleare dth air about a lot of things.
person Sea
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so glad to see you reposted this. I particularly liked your description of Hermoine running down the hall running into something huge and warm and wrapping her arms around it. I think we all have felt that desperation at times. Looking forward to reading more!
person liza123
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay. They're impartial witness is suppossed to be dead, I look forward to seeing how you address this issue. Therefore, please do update and keep this story going.
person Newtype
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet adition I like it and the way its done thus far give suprise and explanation very well, do go on!
person EmZ
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its not too bad (actually its got ALOT of potential)

I would like to know however, who the M/F are and who the M/M are (because i dont read ships i dont like)