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for Prima Amoris

by Narius

person Paige
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, I LOVE it! you don't have to write more. It's perfect as it is, ending with "I love you". But I have a question... if Harry didn't drink the potion/punch, why then did he earlier think that that must be why he was feeling this way towards Snape? or did he not know it was in the punch? Thank you, and wonderful story.
person jelly
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love the way you write and i love this story. you should deffinetly come up with other stories with harry/snape and harry dom. I love it!
person Demon
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Harry was very Slytherin about getting what he wanted, good on him!! This was so hot!! is there going to be more??
person ndut
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's so nice!!! pliz continue as soon as possible
person Hambares
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
**blinks** Wow!
person Shadow Woman
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You will be continuing this right? Very hot!!!!!
person Juno
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Other than you getting just a little help from spell check and needing a coma or three, this is a good story so far. I do hope you continue farther with this, as it looks to have great potential. Keep up the excellent work!
person Drey
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want more!!! How DARE you leave me hanging like this????
person Ari
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad at all. I hope there is a sequel. I will enjoy the reactions.
person Ditzy
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really good. I hope that you write a sequel.