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for Bulgarian Mascara

by DeniPie

schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am totally smitten with this concept!
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person kazfeist
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely job. I can only read Bulgarian phonetically (it was spoken by my grandma and dad, but "we are in America, now"...), but I truly enjoyed how you used it in the story. Mnogo hubevo!
person Nicole
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is a great story! You don't find many pairings of Hermione/Krum and after reading this I sure wish there was more. I was wondering though, will there be more to the story? I sure hope so.
person Tiamat
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absoulutly loved this!! I have been hunting for a Hermoine/Vikor fic since I read GoF! This was so sweet! Is there going to be more? You should write more V/H fics! You are really good! I mean it!! *sends her love*
person B.
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutley love this story! it is beautiful and moving, i demand you write more stories about viktor and Hermione!
person Anon
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!
person Jess
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really sweet. You handled the age difference very well, and although I wish Hermione was a little more affectionate towards Viktor I understand that for a fifteen year old girl she wouldn't really understand all the sexual stuff quite yet. (Hermione is fifteen in GoF, JK said later i think though). Viktor was very sweet though and I very much liked getting some more of his perspective and perhaps the perspective of people for more slavic countries. All in all i really enjoyed your story. Maybe you could do more, or a sequel or something of the like? It would be interesting to see more of this as time passed and Hermione became older and more comfortable with things and hopefully came to feel the same as Viktor already does. Not very cannon, but still something I'd like to read. Keep writing! =)

person Dreamweaver
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a lovely, sweet story of a first time experience. It isn't always roses first time around and I like that he was gentle with Hermione just the same. Well done!! :)