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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More!! more more!! yargh!
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More. More to teh power of 10. More more more! I think 20 or more chapters should do it.
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story, i thought in the begging that it was a bit much, they way they constantly kept saying how they loved each other, and i was truly shocked at the way things turned out with dumbledore and remus in the room with them, but overall the story was just as excellent as the other one i've read. I really look forward to more chapters, like whats up with ron will he continue being a jerk? and will he get a love? and more than all of that i want more of the story line that you promise,
looking forward to your next update.
looking forward to your next update.
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your a very good writer! Great story! Great Plot, even tho it got slow in the last few chapters, time not moving as fast as the other chapters. Your also a very good lemon writer :p. Write us more please!
Dark
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its really good, but the romance suffocated me at the end. i love the whole romance but that was way too much. The size thing was hilarious.
"how come he gets eight inches and i don't?"
HILARIOUS!!!
"how come he gets eight inches and i don't?"
HILARIOUS!!!
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwe! It's so sweet, and Hilarious! I just LOVE IT! Harry Is SO sweet in this one! Okay. I am done..Okay I loved it. Now I'm done! :)
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well um, fine story so far. I actually have only one gripe about it. Your emotions, are like overplayed. I realize you want to state how pure their love is and how much they love it each other but constantly drilling it into the readers heads becomes somewhat annoying. Your description of love was nice, but after reading it 7 times within the same scene I ended up scanning. Just a suggestion, dont overplay so much, you can get a point across by just saying it twice, and once if its powerful enough.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know that song gunther is so funny !!!! love it and soo funny i would have died if i woke up and Ablus and Lupin where standing next to me and harry and we were naked !!! I would have crawled into a hole lol !!! any way awsome story i love the 100 percent smut lol
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ great story please more ..please update soon ...later for now
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol...ok ok, i'll work on the dialogue lmao
that review was hilarious lol
"Your great Harry" "No you're great Mione"
"You've got great abs, Harry" "No, you've got great abs Mione"
lmao lmao
Yea, that kinda needs to be worked on... thanx... i didnt even notice it lol
that review was hilarious lol
"Your great Harry" "No you're great Mione"
"You've got great abs, Harry" "No, you've got great abs Mione"
lmao lmao
Yea, that kinda needs to be worked on... thanx... i didnt even notice it lol