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for Ultimatum

by booback

person Lady Lynn
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, but Hermione's not dead, right??? right??? and harry wont hurt draco, right?
person rox4787
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it oh god oh god please update soon cant wait to read more
person ally
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update
person Mana
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far, the story is kicking along at a good pace which I always look for when I read fan fics. It has substance to it, not just sex scenes which again gives it an air of superiority. I can only hope that it stays this way. Thumbs up, my friend. Thumbs up.
person claire
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just loved it. its was sweet, yet vilinous, im curious to find out who the other person was that raped hermione??? will all be revealed later...i hope so cos draco will kick his ass
person Stag
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God, who raped Hermione???
person angel
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. i love it ... and yeaaa they are getting married .. and how will nicole help then out .. and will draco find out who touch his hermione.. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

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person Lady Lynn
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read what you have of this story so far and I just wanted to tell you how absolutely fabulous it is.
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok.. I've just read the 10 chapters and just- wow! OMG OMG OMG- THE DRAMA! I LOVE this story! Great plot and it all seems so real.. well except the fact that she was a bit too willing at first but hey, its fanfiction! Ok.. the 10th chapter.. I almost cried for Hermione. But.. how about you say he didn't kiss Nicole at ALL and make me happy?!:D Cause.. there's more meaning to a kiss than just a normal fuck, right? Anyway.. update soon! I'm in love with this story.. And congrats about the new baby! I hope it all works out for you..
person Jennifer
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say its still a great story. But why didnt Hermione tell Draco about the rape. I would think she would tell him