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for Ultimatum

by booback

person AraLuna
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, but I do wish I could come up with as eye-catching of a story summary as you have here. I can wrack my brain for hours and still not come up with anything that isn't completely lame. I'm enjoying your story. Its like picking up where The Crimson Jess left me hanging. And Hermione succumbing to Evil-but-desperately-in-love-with-her Draco is one of my favorite guilty pleasures. I promise to tune in this weekend for the next installment. BTW, tried to leave a review several days ago, but couldn't. I know you feel about losing reviews. I lost a bunch myself.
person Pipita
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u better continue thats all I have to say!!!

xD I like I like
person Marigold
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and this is for the author, I did not mean she wouldn't do that, I thought it would have been interesting, if Malfoy had to fight for Hermione. After all, I am a dead 'Hermione/Draco' and 'Sesshoumaru/Kagome' fan, and the point is, the thought of 'Draco/Hermione' would have gotten a, 'That wouldn't happen' review from someone...
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's the title and the warnings, temptress. The title and the warnings. Oh, and the fact that it was really good. But in order to get people to read it... well you know. Now, I really liked it, and I still can't remember you telling me about it. Oh well, I'll look for the next chapter.

'Till a later review--
Athene
person Marigold
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I hope to hear more, though it would have been a bit better if Hermione had fought a bit more, and seemed to doubt her decision to accept Malfoy.
person shadowolf
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh damn that kicks ass wow howd you thinkn of that one its awsome
person johntheheavy
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this would be an awesome one shot as is and if you can continue it i will be most grateful. very good and i like the angle you take with both characters.
person johntheheavy
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this would be an awesome one shot as is and if you can continue it i will be most grateful. very good and i like the angle you take with both characters.
person Liz
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a very good beginning; I'm intrigued
person candice
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love your story