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for Ultimatum

by booback

person DracosGurly
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW, I absolutely love this story. You've done a good job! Can't wait for the next chapter.
person mariah
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story You are a really good writter I read your other story "A day at the office" you should so make a seqeul to that one. Anyway i enjoy reading your storys
person Petalsoft
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great story concept and very wicked. I love it. Please keep going.
person Night Shade
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Here's your review! This is an interesting fic so far, so update soon so I can read more ^_~
person Maevenly
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You were not kidding when you shared that this was a dark fic... It is very well done - conveyng a true Master/slave relationshp can be very difficult. I do have to admit that I was hoping that Hermione would commit suicide before she would take the mark, but in keeping with the Dom/sub situation - her responses are very intuned to the psychological attachments which do form.
person angel
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor ginny ... please update soon would love to read more

angel
person Akasha
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FUCKING GOD, MAN!!!! THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!! *starts sobbing* IT WAS SO FUCKING ROMANTIC!!!! I LOVE YOU, MAN!!!! KEEP ON WRITING!!!!!!
person sailormoonhannah
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story!! please update soon!!!!!!!
person Kiki
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far. Can't wait to see more! :)
person angel
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please please please update soon i would love to read more ...

angel