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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting... still very intersting... i like harry's actions.. but you could use with a little more set up... i know you are trying to get the story moving.. but i like a little more description in my stories... is good tho.. update soon
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, this story is awful. You really need a beta, or at least re-read it before you post it (you spelled VOLDEMORT wrong!).
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
could prove to be interesting... :) update soon so i can be a better judge..
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! Can't wait for chapter 2!