rate_review Reviews

I've come to realize that your writing voice incorporates figurative language really well, and yet fancifully sprinkles "morbid" all over -- which is actually good in this case, considering it is one of the key elements that I've seen in this particular chapter.

What I like about your story thus far is the fact that you are IC with the canon characters and you're gradually building on something rather than just shoving it out there. You take the time to explain the circumstances behind why things are happening, and I identify with that.

The only things I would change are minor.

[ Note: Yes, I've finally gotten around to sitting and reading your fic. Be happy. I mean really. ]

Thank you.

I'm painting precariously on a very dark canvas, the story does seem to be dragging me along. Although I confess to elaborate on Voldemort being that I think he is not engulfed in sexual things simply in that his character appears to be more of a sadist who would derive great pleasure from other's pain, he made this evidently clear in the books moreso than the er.... movies.... The torture of a writhing, pathetic creature would be more to his liking than naked flesh . . . unless he was inflicting some sort of irrevocable mental trauma along with the sex that would never disappear. Then perhaps for that sake he might indulge in a bit of this or that. But not lovingly, god no.

You liked that corpses bit eh? It makes me think of 'Hannibal' . . . .

Argh, I hate the holidays, all these little . . . obligations . . . Unfortunately this means I probably won't post in a while, and I could really use the respite ... ah well.

I finally found time to read your story. It is flowing nicey, you have a thoughtful and poetic way of writing that i envy a little.
The letter from voldemort was chilling, the corpses are dancing auror! Ha ha!
Narcissa

You better write more, Megabyte...D: Or I'll kill you.

Yes, this is Bob capturing your account for the purpose of reviewing. You always complain how no body likes to review your fics, but HAH! I'm doing it. So there. Take that.

All I can say is props for keeping Voldemort exquisitely like his evil wantonly sadistic self, and making Lucius act like the whiney little whore that he is. x3 Personally, I think Azriel is your best female character yet. And you know as well as I that we've each seen a lot of your female characters. In the meantime, consider putting more humor...>>; I liked the various descriptive paragraphs where you demeaned someone..or something..they were amusing. Of course, only I can appreciate the full genius of it.

-- Bob

P.S. WRITE MORE. OR ELSE!!!

I really liked your first chappie. I don't normally read stuff about Voldemort, but the summary and title were intriguing. Your command was my wish, I reviewed, so now write more!!!

OHHH Yess.... Wantssss moreeee. Soooo much more... I loved your story.. Very good with vocabulary. Very nice with sentence structure. Very nice with grammar. Very nice with structure.. Dammit. VERY NICE WITH EVERYTHING!!!!!!!

I have to say I am IMPRESSED! You did a wonderful job. Keep up the good Work!