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for Through the Hoop

by metafrantic

schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute. The landlord's note was funny. please update soon. Oh, and i really liked this chapter. Awesome.
person LucKyo
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, Mr. Dorkins a good guy. At least she'll have one nice person on the team who's on her side. I like how you resolved the problem, although one wonders what's next. Good update.
person LucKyo
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Impressive idea to write about. The theme of sexual harassment (or worse) in the wizarding world because Angelina is the only woman player is a right clever premise. I wonder how far you will go with that. Still, the meaness in me was happy she beat her attackers ass even though she was horrified by it! I like a gutsy woman character. Update soon, please.
person sango~san
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more...and please have Fred in the story. Please!!!!
person Teda (not logged in)
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't care. Jenkins deserved it, the bastard! ANYWAY, great story so far. I was completely involved from the first sentence on and Angelina was always a favorite of mine. Angelina/Fred, that is. I hope he's brought in as well. Can't wait to see where you go with this.
person Juri
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, intruiging! I really like this. Definitely want to read more chapters.
person eurydicesfalling
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is excellent. i'm truly interested in seeing where you take this. please update soon.

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