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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright,
So I just started reading this story yesterday,
&& I have to sayy,
It's amazing.
You are truly a talented writer.
It's just sad that youu haven't updated in so long so I'm thinking this review is a lost cause,
But please,
PLEASE update this storyy,
It's WAYY too good to leave alone.
Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
So I just started reading this story yesterday,
&& I have to sayy,
It's amazing.
You are truly a talented writer.
It's just sad that youu haven't updated in so long so I'm thinking this review is a lost cause,
But please,
PLEASE update this storyy,
It's WAYY too good to leave alone.
Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really bad about not reviewing but I had to write and tell you that this is seriously probably the sexiest story I have ever read. I love the dialogue, the literary banter. I'm hoping that you've only been busy and that this isn't the end of this story. Or at least that you are planning to write another one. Pleeeaaase. I'm in dire need of intelligent fiction.*pouts*
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what happened to this story?? please don't leave us hangin!!!
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, gods. Don't you dare even think that your writing -erotic scenes and all- is anything less than enrapturing. This story is wonderful, spellbinding, and enchanting. I cannot wait to see what happens next!
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi AraLuna,
I love your story so much, I just finished reading it for the 5th time. I've never read anything as beautiful as your story and the way you write. This is the kind of man and romance that I dream of. Thank you. Also, I hope you update soon. I am eager to know what will happen next.
Love Desdemona Rae.
I love your story so much, I just finished reading it for the 5th time. I've never read anything as beautiful as your story and the way you write. This is the kind of man and romance that I dream of. Thank you. Also, I hope you update soon. I am eager to know what will happen next.
Love Desdemona Rae.
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your allusions! I love your repartee! I love the tension you're building between them. It captures beautifully the feint and parry of two intelligent people in the first stages of attraction. PLEASE WRITE MORE. (This is so much better than the usual drivel.)
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, glad this chapter is finally up. Had a long wait with Aff.net being down and all, so that was rather annoying! And I hope you're doing well? This chapter has been brillant like the previous chapters! I love it when they start quoting from other texts and poems! It's romantic! Take care of yourself; until next time then, Love Telpy. xx
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ps: Have you got Livejournal? Add me on if you can - Telperaca
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Exactly as I thought. I knew I read those lines somewhere. And yep, I was right, it was from the Songs of Solomon. The most sensual book in the Bible. :) Kudos! Email me again once you update!