rate_review Reviews

You're making it too formal. Other than that, it seems to be going somewhere. Brilliantly written.

A really enjoyable first chapter. Do take your time with it - I hate rushing a good story! I'll keep an eye out for your updates, and will go and listen to Joni Mitchell again!

I love your story so far. Very neat idea. I love the idea of people changing for the better.

I like the story so far.
Keep up the good work!

Oooh! Please update soon!

One chapter and I'm already hooked! I'm going to have to make space in my Rec. Reading list. This was brilliant!

Bek

I love how the dialogue between Hermione and Draco actually sounds like things that the characters would say!!!! I mean I can actually see them both saying it exactly the way you have it....very good work...can't wait to read the rest....I also love all the quotes and book references (appeals to my true geek form)...neruda is great!!!