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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW beautiful writting.Your description of everything going on is so perfect, not too much nor too little to descripe the surroundings, feelings and everything else that makes this story really believable. Hope that you are to update real soon, i can only guess it must take a lot of your time to great such credible fiction. keep up the good work.
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh; good start; reminds me of a summer wine; to be enjoyed at a leisurely pace.
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great i cant wait for more!!!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, so far! Nice language from folks supposedly well-educated. Let me know when you post again. Cheers!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Stunning! I think this promises to be one of the finest fanfiction works I have had the privelege to read. Rest assured I will be checking in daily for updates. As impatient as I am I understand that fanfictions of this quality take time and research. Bravo!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderfully written...the dialogue is just dead on. cannot wait to see where you take your story. original premise and spectacular writing. thoroughly enjoyable!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Your a real good writer and your style is unique!I loved it! please update. Your writting is perfect and witty! thanks for the story!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh, great start. i can't wait to see what happens next. please update soon! :-)
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done. I hope you write another one soon.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really believe that a slow build up to a story, is really the best was to
increase the tension within a story. Your first chapter does that in a
really clever way. I enjoyed their conversation and look forward to seeing
how their relationship grows. Best wishes,
increase the tension within a story. Your first chapter does that in a
really clever way. I enjoyed their conversation and look forward to seeing
how their relationship grows. Best wishes,