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for Tin Angel

by AraLuna

person Hope
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh i love your writting it is so much better than ny romantic movie. :sigh:
Absolutely wonderful, bowing down at your greatnest and asking your very nicely for more.
person Anon
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story. please post again soon... and if you have any other stories hidden away somewhere, post them too! it is always so nice when you find one of these truly romantic stories... i love both characters, and can't wait to see more interaction! i love the way you write draco and hermione, and i love the little insights into draco's mind when he contemplates hermione... especially her sundresses :) sigh. such a good story. i can't wait to read more.

person Maevenly
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This si WONDERFUL - the nerd in me is thriving on your literary prowess. Draco is magnificent!
person sheila
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DO NOT pratice restraint on quotes!!! I love the way this is written and Draco is wonderful. When Mione is done with him please send him my way. Keep up the literary references. By the way the flying monkey reference was the best.
person mmfcfa
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done.

An intelligently made erotic story. Very rare!
person ashleigh
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please god update more often. i'm so used to reading fanfics that are either too fluffy, too angsty, or *dare i say it* too smutty. you have baffeled me with books that i'm now eager to read, and the wit that you introduce makes me soo happy i could dance. if it wasnt in harry potter world, this could easily be a novel, or a movie, or something. you should also write your own stories. i hate to say it, but dont spend all of your talent on fanfics. the knowledge that you could spread with your wit is something to amaze.
~ashleighb.
ps, did i mention update more often?
person AHathaway
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the smartest and cutest D/Hr fics i've encountered, I believe I recieved the link via LJ. What it's doing on AFF, I've not yet seen, and was a bit dubious to click the link, but by jove i am glad i did. I also adore your style of writing. These are the kinds of fics I only encounter once in a blue moon, i wish they were all as well done as yours is comming out to be. xCheers
person Melody
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so AWESOME. I love it. It's well-written, detailed, funny, and so witty I can hardly stand it - please write more! All the allusions are awesome, too. Since reading this, I'm planning to run out and read some Dinesen when I get the chance. I must admit, though, I like Borges more than Neruda.

person kenzi
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fabulous story so far! your writing flows very smoothly, and despite the jump into the future and changed dispositions, all characters seem very..well...in character. lol. I'd love to hear more from you, this is fantastic!
person JTBJAB
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe... this is great! I very much look forward to your next chapter!

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