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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not even sure why I chose to read this fic. I'm a complete slasher, normally. I guess I just wanted something different and I stumbled across this after being intrigued by a piece of Draco/Hermione fan art that I saw somewhere. I'm enchanted. I love the Draco that acknowledges his bastardly past even though he is "redeemed". The reality that we don't just change overnight is something most fic authors fail to bring to their characterizations. A lovely start -- bookmarking in hopes that there will be an update soon.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so incredibly fluffy and fun and a nice change that I cannot wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the wonderful work!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm absolutely loving this story. Your inclusion of great literature is terribly clever and fitting for Hermione's character. I think that stories that express Draco's thoughts are the best because we don't get much of that in the Harry Potter books. The fact that you are creating a real romance between H and D will only make their eventual act of love that much more satisfying. Also, keep Blaise and Draco interactions coming because Blaise is the perfect foil for Draco's inner thoughts. Thanks for a story that's definitely worth waiting for.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe... I really do love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter.... this one was beautiful!
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading all three chapters and it's the lovely and most literate story i have ever read needless to say, I LOVE it!
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
absolutely incredible update. romantic, whimsical and completely fun! I love those fun fair rides! I always used to get into trouble for turning upside down :P
You've also left me with quite a lot of reading to do :) I'm glad that you reference all the books.
You've also left me with quite a lot of reading to do :) I'm glad that you reference all the books.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'd just like to also point out that I read this chapter while listening to henry mancini's "elephant walk" and then "moon river (instrumental)" and it flowed quite nicelt with the story :)
(I accidentally reviewed above as anonymous)
(I accidentally reviewed above as anonymous)
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I am so enjoying your story. I love the small buildup and although it creats you a lot
of work their verbal fencing. I have actually read the book The Wizard of Oz and had forgotten
that the witch wore white, like the a clear moon, shining bright. Or something like that, quote out of
memory, and it was years ago.
If he had charmed the wine to look like water (I am not sure I understand why he would do that) surely he would
transfigure that plastic cups into Waterford glass? Seems more like Draco's style.
Looking forward to the next update. Best wishes,
of work their verbal fencing. I have actually read the book The Wizard of Oz and had forgotten
that the witch wore white, like the a clear moon, shining bright. Or something like that, quote out of
memory, and it was years ago.
If he had charmed the wine to look like water (I am not sure I understand why he would do that) surely he would
transfigure that plastic cups into Waterford glass? Seems more like Draco's style.
Looking forward to the next update. Best wishes,
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
there is no need for self restraint. good chapter! plleeeaaaase update soon!
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Another wonderful cahpter. Of course, you could have said, "the date was splendid" and we all would've loved it, though, actually hearing of how things went down was really cool. I was like, "omg, omg, omg!" the whole way through. You're a marvelous writer, and your writing draws me in to a point that the only way I know that I'm at the end of a chapter is when I start reading the author's notes. lol.
Update soon!
Truth
Update soon!
Truth