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for Tin Angel

by AraLuna

person cruttan
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*glares at Bill* Who would pick Fleur over Hermione. *huffs* I can't complain too much, I suppose, since it leaves a window for our darling Draco to step in. Your Draco is just so lovely. I love his reactions to Hermione. And she sounds so adorable! I like that your descriptions of her aren't about her huge breasts or such things, but they still give the impression of how lovely she is, especially in Draco's eyes. *sigh*

This is just a lovely romance. It's fluffy, but in a refreshing, delightful sort of way that makes me envious. I really love the tone of your writing. It's a pleasure to read.
person Lyn
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There aren't enough words to describe how much I love this story. It's simply so beautifully and cleverly written and an absolute delight to read. I cannot wait to see where it leads.
person fiona
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what a great chapter!!! please update when you can!
person lilycat
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm on chapter 2 and I'm hooked! I really ought to go to bed and NOT leave reviews when I'm sleep deprived, as they inevitably turn out to be nonsensical, but I just wanted to tell you how much I love it.

There is this whole aura to the story, a sort of ambience. I love the flow and the language, it creates this very dreamy atmosphere. I am but a humble musician who knows very little of literature and I'm horrible at doing the analytical style reviews and putting this stuff into words. It's just beautifully worded. I really enjoy your writing style. It's so pleasant to read.

*sigh* I'm going to keep reading because I feel certain that it will ensure pleasant dreams. It's just lovely. :-)
person neo-meo
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee itttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt more soon!!!!!!!!
person lilycat
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person Sunny
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM

As I have said before yours is one of the most intelligent fan fiction stories that I have read in a long time!!! This is yet again another aawesome chapter!!!

Yes I am interested in the email list...because I don't want to miss an update...my email address is sundeephans@yahoo.ca

Good luck with the move and with school....I can't wait until your next update!!!
person oetbmalfoysmom
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again, you've managed to write a wonderfully descriptive and entertaining chapter. I check AFF everyday hoping you've updated. I realize quality writing takes time, so I try to be patient and read other stories in the meantime, but many of them are not nearly worth half the time spent reading them. I find myself rereading the chapters in Tin Angel and enjoying them just as much as if it were the first time reading them! So, I hope your move goes smoothly and all your writing muses make the trip with you. Have a wonderful holiday.
person Mish
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the dialogue in your fic! It's so witty and moving. I look forward to the upcoming chapters! I also love how you integrate into your fic other pieces of literature! Take your time to write! Did I mention I love this fic? I love this fic!
person elektrik_storm
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love this fic! the literary names and terms dropped in makes me smile as i am a lit student... please update soon!

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