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for Tin Angel

by AraLuna

person Bek Allen
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! This was a brilliant chapter! I loved Ron wanting to tie Bill up and let the local children have at him with sticks, I loved the Spanish Inquisition from the Weasleys and Potters... I *LOVED* the references. And I think the only one I didn't get was Finnegan's Wake - but then again, I haven't read much by James Joyce.

I can see why Hermione would relate to Matilda as a child however; a brilliant idea. And Dahl is such a classic children's writer. I've both read and seen Babbette's Feast. A wonderful tale and I can definitely see how Ron would just love it.

If there is an update email list, I'd love to be added to it! (bek_allen01@hotmail.com). I am always looking forward to reading new chapters of this, it's both educational (I'm now determind to read James Joyce, especially Finnegan's Wake, and re-read several more of the classics you've mentioned), and fun.

Please update when you next get a chance, and Happy Holidays!

Bek
person geo
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, I love your story as usual. Thanks for writing. Please keep it up. Your story is so witty and educated. Thanks!

geo
person Little Tiny Bee
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, you are an amazing author. I hope this is something that you plan to do professionally some day. This story is magnificient! Thank you for writing this!! I hope there will be more very soon!
person Anon
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story!!!! update sooN!!!! please!!!
person Krystyn
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is such a wonderful story! I love how you tie romance, intelligent conversation, and tension all together. And all your references are making me want to expand my taste in books. Oh, and Luna---she and Hermione as friends is the icing on the cake. I don't think I've ever seen that done before, but it truly works. And if you are going to do the e-mail notification, here's my address: vkrystyn88@hotmail.com. Great job. ^_^
person JTBJAB
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, but the most erotic and smutty scenes can be when there is actually no major touching at all! Grin... I look forward to your next update!
person Kenda
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I don't have much time to review as i'm just heading out to finish getting the veg and food for christmas, but just wanted to say thanks for the delightful chapter. I really do adore this story, I love all the references litered throughout it and your writting style. It's very well written and intelligent and the small details you add in like Luna re filling Hermione's glass with her own water, are all just brilliant and make it even more enjoyable to read. Thankyou and can't wait for the next chapter.
person Aunt Bijou
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Honey, you are either from Austin, or a fan of Ozomatli! I read that line about the band leading a conga-line of 400 drunken fans out onto the streets and nearly fell over laughing. You're right, that is just too good not to use somewhere in a story! Love what you're doing, and how you're doing it. Can't wait for the next installment. You're making this pairing delicious!
person Ashley
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story i cant wait until the next chapters come out. waitin to read Ashley
person fleur
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omigod! YOU CAN'T END IT THERE!! nooooooooo you must update it. I love your story, humor with romance and witty remarks, loaded with scandal and suspense, excelent combination. And the evil cliffhanger, just to annoy your readers. PLEASE CONTINUE!!! e-mail me when you update please.