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That was so amazing!!!!!!!! That definitely ranks high up among the best erotic scenes I've read so far! You are an amazing writer and this is one of my favorite stories! I can't wait for more chapters! Please keep writing!

amazing! i do not think you are a 12 year writer, if you are, you have fantastic vocabulary and i have never known of a 12 year old who knew so much about literature and poems. great job! i am awaiting more chapters , please keep going! this is extremely well done story and am hoping for another chapter in the following week.

Beautiful chapter!!! If I was Hermione I'd have said screw the Fred and George, take me Draco!!! Update soon!!!

great instalment... surprised there wasn't a footnote for "teddy and jo" :)

Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.

What a absolutely delightful story! I'm so glad it was recommended to me. I love the slow buildup of their relationship and the whitty banter....although I have to admit to being impatient for them to get to the "next step" -- we all know Draco won't wait that long now, will he? >>wink, wink<<

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I am absolutely loving your story! Rather lighthearted, but at the same time, somewhat serious. I greatly enjoy the number of references you put in here, because, even though I haven't read many of the novels in which they reference, I think it adds much character and depth to the story. Keep going with this, I hope to see an update soon!

And you know, I was just thinking. Someone mentioned that the dialogue is too formal, but it's obviously all said in a lighthearted, teasing manner. It's not really that formal, but at the same time, it sort of is, which feels appropriate to me, as they were never close back in their school days. Anyway, one more comment I thought of is that your style reminds me of Jane Austen, especially in Pride and Prejudice, just the way they talk and exchange thoughts makes me think of Elizabeth and Darcy... Oh Darcy.... Anyway.... Ok, great story, and I absolutely love it.

I really like this story. ALOT. Lusty Draco is a sexy Draco especially when he has great taste in witches^^ *yeah Hermione* I feel awefully bad though about her relationship with Bill, did he have an affair or Are Ron and Harry mad at him because he hurt their best friend? Anyway Great story^^ I hope you update soon^^ really soon...

Perfect. I loved it! Email me when you update. Cheers! :)