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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really like this one so far! It's added to my favorite stories list.
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohmigod! that chapter was HOT! I loved the scene in the carriage... I'm so jealous :)
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u shouldnt be nervous cause that chapter was frickin awesome!!! and I can't wait until the next chapter which better be commin up soon'!!!!
-megan
-megan
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 5 - LOL You described their first sexual exploration beautifully. This was a very hot chapter. I'm just wondering if the Prophet got pictures of the subtle foreplay that was going on at the opera, hmmmm? I am totally enjoying this story, update soon please.
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I can't belive i waited until this chapter to post my first review. Your fic is absolutely amazing. Your writing is so unique compared to all the other fic authors I've read, and I would VERY MUCH appreciate it if you could add me to your email update list.I must have read your fic at least three or four times in the past couple days ... its so good. I neverr get tired of the way you write, and your manipulation of the characters ... wow. Update soon please! <3
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, finally some naughtyness.
and no you are definitly not a virgin, in fact i almost think that you did some research before writting this.
and no you are definitly not a virgin, in fact i almost think that you did some research before writting this.
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Part 2 - I forgot to mention above how much I enjoy Luna here. She is so matter of fact and true to Hermione. I love her here.
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg...i love it..
please update!!
the sex thing was fine...i dont think ur a 12 yo virgin as u put it...lol
:)
mucho luv...
kristal
please update!!
the sex thing was fine...i dont think ur a 12 yo virgin as u put it...lol
:)
mucho luv...
kristal
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. it is so well written and interesting to read. please add me to your e-mail update list cause i always can't wait for your next chapters. good job and keep doing what you've been doing cause it works.
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in so long, but I thought I must break my non-reviewing streak here.
Oh. My. God. This was fucking AWESOME! I cannot believe that you've never written anything erotic in your life. Absolutely CANNOT. This was beautiful. I mean, didn't expect anything less from you--you're an awesome writer--but I was still in shock when I read this. I think that Draco's struggle not to touch Hermione at first was great. You portrayed his desire for her very well. And also, you added to his character with describing how he wanted to take it slow, and how scared he became at the thought of losing her. It showed how deep into their relationship he really was.
And I, for one, thought that Draco's recitation of the poem whie they were doing the dirty (that was still somewhat clean, seeing as they didn't go all the way), was soooooo sexy. I mean, God! I was all hot and bothered just from reading what he was doing; when he started saying the poem--Jesus Christ, I nearly drooled! I sooooooooo need a shower right now.
I had suspicions before that this was set in Chelsea in the first chapter (the Mermaid Cafe sounded so familiar, but I have a bad memory so... yeah.) I think the fact that it's set in a place that I'm familiar with--a place where I am nearly all day Mondays through Fridays (my school is on 18th st.--makes it more enjoyable for me to read. I know where everything is going on this way (my friend and I even went down Bleecker street looking for said book store. We'd been to one on Bleecker before--the one found when we went looking again--but it was smaller. So either we totally missed it, or I leave it to you own creative license. Either way, it was still reallly good!)
Anyway, I'm sure I'm getting annoying, so I'll end this here. Once again, you did a fabulous job with this. My body is jumping from this.
Awesome work!
Truth
Oh. My. God. This was fucking AWESOME! I cannot believe that you've never written anything erotic in your life. Absolutely CANNOT. This was beautiful. I mean, didn't expect anything less from you--you're an awesome writer--but I was still in shock when I read this. I think that Draco's struggle not to touch Hermione at first was great. You portrayed his desire for her very well. And also, you added to his character with describing how he wanted to take it slow, and how scared he became at the thought of losing her. It showed how deep into their relationship he really was.
And I, for one, thought that Draco's recitation of the poem whie they were doing the dirty (that was still somewhat clean, seeing as they didn't go all the way), was soooooo sexy. I mean, God! I was all hot and bothered just from reading what he was doing; when he started saying the poem--Jesus Christ, I nearly drooled! I sooooooooo need a shower right now.
I had suspicions before that this was set in Chelsea in the first chapter (the Mermaid Cafe sounded so familiar, but I have a bad memory so... yeah.) I think the fact that it's set in a place that I'm familiar with--a place where I am nearly all day Mondays through Fridays (my school is on 18th st.--makes it more enjoyable for me to read. I know where everything is going on this way (my friend and I even went down Bleecker street looking for said book store. We'd been to one on Bleecker before--the one found when we went looking again--but it was smaller. So either we totally missed it, or I leave it to you own creative license. Either way, it was still reallly good!)
Anyway, I'm sure I'm getting annoying, so I'll end this here. Once again, you did a fabulous job with this. My body is jumping from this.
Awesome work!
Truth