rate_review Reviews

WOW!!! what a mind blowing that was. Everytime i read your fiction i keep wondering how/where you find the right quotes you use. This is why Draco and Hermione should be together. Great minds think alike.

Love how you wrote chapter 5 in Draco's p.o.v; really showed us how much desperate he was in needing her. Weaving the poem in between the "coupling" ;) I must applaude you for that.
How do you know what quotes to use? do you plan before hand!? This is why i would never think of writting, best leave it to talented people like you.


Just excellent.. cant wait to read more.

Lovely chapter. Can't wait for the next!

I like the whole chapter!!!! I would also love to be on the update list please!!!

You're doing wonderfully. I love their banter (and the sex was good too). I'm looking forward to more.

hi I just readed your fic,and all I can say is..... When are you going to update! WoW I really loved how you wrote this fic so far.
And I hope you are going to finish this fic. I can't wait to see what happens nexts.
Nadia!

i feeling hot hot hot are u sure u never wrote anything like that it felt like i was reading a beautiful love story when the two characters at the end or middle make love you are such a great writer so this is why i have to ask u to update soon

Well, I'm back. After recovering from my smut-induced coma this morning, I realized that I completely forgot to review the rest of the chapter. My bad. Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that your characterization of Luna is priceless. She's a true friend to Hermione and she's just quirky enough without being too-far out there to really set the comic relief in the story. Love her, love your Draco and Hermione, love your book quotes, LOVE this story!

YEA SMUT! I think my family might find it strange if I switched off the furnace in favor of air conditioning, but I swear the temperature in the house just went up about 20 degrees.... Nothing sexier than a man quoting a love poem while expertly catering to your needs~loved the verbal foreplay beforehand at the start of their date. I'm really enjoying Draco's POV throughout this story. Hopefully, you'll allow Hermione to return the uh, favor, uh soon.

you have managed to portray the feelings and emotions of someone in the early stages of falling in love. the first date, the second date at the library and now the first sexual experience. you are doing wonderful. it is a sweet, beautiful story.

Amazing. That was amazing. The erotic scene was hot and well written. I love your literary references through out the story. Can't wait to read more!