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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot stuff!
Anyone who mistakes this for the writing of a 12 year old virgin can't read and must be blind with no imagination.
Lovely, despite the wait. (As in update soon!!!!!) And you're building up anticipation for the climax (big bang?) is fun. (And my sense of humor is why I stick to reading and not writing.)
Keep up the good work.
Anyone who mistakes this for the writing of a 12 year old virgin can't read and must be blind with no imagination.
Lovely, despite the wait. (As in update soon!!!!!) And you're building up anticipation for the climax (big bang?) is fun. (And my sense of humor is why I stick to reading and not writing.)
Keep up the good work.
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You don't have to worry, your an amazing writer and that was perfectly written. You have such a wonderful flow with your words that it can together really well. They are such a perfect match especially in this story because you make them so intelligent. Thanks, don't worry, it's great.
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely fabulous! Slow, hot building of tension that burst into erotic heat! A job well done if you ask me! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is SUCH A GOOD CHAPTER! But I NEED to see what happens at the Weasley's house- what happens when they see the hickey.... dum dum dum dum.........
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You never cease to amaze me! Don't worry,
It's not rubbish at all, you've written is wonderfully. =)
Keep up the lovely work! ^^
It's not rubbish at all, you've written is wonderfully. =)
Keep up the lovely work! ^^
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
who are you trying to kid?!? that was HOT!!! they're not even doing the horizontal mambo yet, "just touching". although, i spotted a grammatical error back there. it's still damn good! update soon!
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it!!!!! u should continue
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow... is it hot in here or is it me? *swoons*
Your Story is one of the best Dramione-fics and on my top-favorite-list (and believe me, there are not so much good ones out there).
Keep up the good work and don't worry, no one will think you're 12 years old after THAT scene...
Sincerely yours
FreakWave
Your Story is one of the best Dramione-fics and on my top-favorite-list (and believe me, there are not so much good ones out there).
Keep up the good work and don't worry, no one will think you're 12 years old after THAT scene...
Sincerely yours
FreakWave
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you're introducing Hermione to Draco's friends. In a lot of Draco/Hermione stories, his friends completely disappear or are met much later.
Your love scene was very erotic and HOT, especially with the poem.
Your love scene was very erotic and HOT, especially with the poem.