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OMG ! your style in writing is absolutely unbelievable ! I enjoyed reading every part of your description, I like your chararcterization of each personnage and what an intresting idea to put Luna in the second main female character of your story! And most of all, adding references and quotes from muggle books authors put another dimension at your story, in comparison of other HP fanfictions!
Indeed, I love my 'promenade' between the lines of each chapters of that story, and can't wait for the next ones to come. Can I be in that updates list ? so I won't miss a piece ? I would be glad to send you pictures of the Op

hi, it's me again. weirdly, my email isn't showing, so, here it is, use it as you please : moon22@tiscali.fr :)

woah...bill seems like an asshole. very good job! keep up the good work, update soon please :-)

i love this story it's so full of passion! i loved the erotic scene it was very hot and they haven't even shagged yet i can't wait till they do and i can't wait until you update! lol you do not sound 12 at all so don't worry!

Brilliant story - I really like it. It's well-written, has decent characterisation, a good plot line that advances at the right pace (not too fast, not too slow, good build-up) and good erotica - believable and damn sexy. It stands out from the crowd as one of the few stories that appeals to me on all levels (style, plot, characters, sex scenes). It's also great to be read something where I like the plot and don't have to (intellectually) wince at the grammar, spelling or style. Keep up the good work

Please write more asap, I want to keep reading.

WOW! the chapter was GREAT! I loved the vivid descriptions of the steamy scene in the carriage. The poetry was a great touch. I love your writing! It's a refreshingly wonderful way of a Draco/Hermione story. I'm an avid reader of literature, and it's just been experience reading your work. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh this is wonderful!! I adored this fic until you wrote chapter 5...and then I fell madly in love with it! I absolutley adore Neruda and the way you use his poetry is nothing short of heavenly. I've actually read a Alias fanfic with Syd/Sark pairing that used Neruda and I sobbed throughout most of it because the author used it beautifully as well. I can't wait for you to update so please, please add me to your list. Oh! Don't worry about your erotica, it was stellar. Like, flames were engulfing me while reading it stellar. You're doing an amazing job with the characters and I adore what you're doing with Luna. It's so easy for fanfic writers to just saddle Hermione with Ginny, which is fine and there's not a thing wrong with that, but taking a different direction and having Luna and Hermione have this great friendship is just a refreshing idea and I'm thoroughly enjoying it. Thank you so much for writing this exquisite fanfiction and please update as soon as possible.

For a first timer that was excellent! I eagerly await the next chapter from you.

oh my god...definitely not rubbish...u portrayed the passion b/t them perfectly...dont think for a second that its even remotely bad...the story as a whole is great!!

This was an awesome chapter! And I love this story! Keep up the great work!