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i loved it. update soon

i really liked this chapter! you did a wonderful job of portraying hermione's and draco's thoughts and feelings. i cant wait to read more from you! :]

i thought this chapter was absolutely fabulous! no worries, it was written very well. please update soon cant wait to read what happens next...

That last scene of Chapter 5 was sensual. I've had the pleasure of experiencing that minus the carriage and the plot. It was almost like reliving the experience. Hermione's loss of control rang true. Now about the plot...good stuff, no great stuff. I love the story. It's realistic and romantic too. Keep up the good work! Crank them out faster! I love the story!

Hi Ariluna, I just came upon your fic today and I am disappointed that I haven't read this earlier. I really enjoyed the balance you have between the literary references and common dialogue. And their relationship developed perfectly - your pacing and reasoning are sound.

I noticed that Draco has a fixation for Hermione's shoulder/clavicle area - fetish?

Ron and his eternal love for food. I think that's the real romance story right there. ;)

Regardless, I can't wait to read more. And hopefully I'll be able to recognize more allusions. (Got the Bronte sisters, Wizard of Oz, R. Dahl... and that's like it.)

Lovely job, so far. I emailed you regarding your FF.net concerns. Looking for more...

I've made up my mind... your Draco is just the hottest, most, sexiest, loving, Draco of all.

Wonderful! Please update soon! :D

This is spectacular! I'm here via one of the D/Hr Yahoo!Groups as it was recommended there and I must say, I'm suitably impressed. I have an affinity for well-written stories and yours is certainly that!

I am overjoyed at the numerous references to various things (La Traviata is actually one of my favourite operas) and I must encourage you to keep up this excellent work! Well-done. :D

And yes, please add me to the email alert list of when you update! :)

OMG!!!! That was just HOT HOT HOT! Very sexy, very erotic. You did a great job. Draco reciting Neruda as he's seducing and caressing his cara mia. My oh my--this is one of my top fanfic reading moments. I am going to share this link with my romance lovin' buddies. Againm FANTASTIC chapter, you've accomplished to write a very sweet and steamy love scene.