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I'm not good at constructive criticism, I just want to say *damn*, this is a good fic. I love all the literary references (and have added several to my must read-list), the clever dialogue, and the realistic characterizations. Very, very well-written. I'd love to be added to your email notifying list thingy, as I rarely visit this site but really want to continue following this fic. :)

OMG!! You are amazing! This is such an intelligent fic. I love their 'banter'. I love that they're both adult, with their own lives and meeting like this. Chapter 5's erotic scene was BEAUTIFUL. I love it. This fic is just oozing with so much sexual tension, so much desire, constraining until they just can't take it anymore! Ah! It makes me want to date someone new just for this feeling. I love that you take the time to draw it out. I love how you focus on their relationship, I love that you don't write about the days in between and how they miss each other. You keep giving such wonderful interactions for us to read, and maintain the plot.. and ah. I love you. :) I'm tempted to go out and read all those books you referenced! This is such a beautiful fic, and your effort shines through. Not only that, it's a romance fic with smut so whooooo!! Re: Bill and the diamond ring; my bf says the same thing - should I be wary about this? lol Man oh man. Wonderful story. Keep it up!

I loved your fic! It was very erotic but not at all in a bad way. I'm actually very impressed with your extensive knowledge of books and poems. Is this your first fic because it seems to me that you're not at all an amateur in writing? I also liked the way you've portrayed Ron here because in most fics he just seems like an uncaring idiot who is too insensitive to even have an iota of feeling in his body. I would like Harry to have a bigger role here too because the Weasleys overshadow him. Luna is also very funny. I never thought of her as someone who was very open and someone Hermione can call her closest confidante. If I don't seem too forward, I'd like to suggest a bit more interaction between Draco's friends and Hermione's friends. It would be a lot more interesting if there was a conflict between the two parties. I hope you update frequently and can you add me to your email update list? I'd really appreciate it. Thanks.

This is quite possibly one of the best Draco/Hermione stories I've read in a long time. Your story is just so wonderful. I'm at a loss for words to descirbe it. I don't think you have to worry about writing any erotic scenes. You've got it down perfectly! I'll be eagerly waiting for your next chapter.

Hi ya!

Once again, I loved your chapter 4. I've not got round to reading chapter 5 (you'll know...) and so I hope I get to read it asap!
The HG and DM romance so far seems quite romantic as well as quite believable so far. It's interesting to see where it's going to go from there...
Hehe.
I wonder what'll happen when everyone else finds out who she's seeing!

Well, time to go home!
Hoping for more updates...

Telpy.

You have no worries, my dear. This past chapter was incredibly and wonderfully well-written, and it fit perfectly to have Draco quote Neruda in his rapture over Hermione and her body. Wonderful! Since you seem to have read the Bronte sisters, I was wondering...which one do you prefer (if you like them at all; I can remember the first time I read them and wished to see my copy of Jane Eyre replacing the logs in my fireplace)? The literary references you easily incorporate are rare in this arena, and it's refreshing and amusing. Adds a bit of depth, I think. The soul cannot thrive in the absence of a garden, no?
Keep Writing, Happy Reading, and Update Soon!
GM