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for Tin Angel

by AraLuna

person Anon
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this isn my fav sotry i love it! its hot romantic w/ just a right amount o angst! looooooooooooooove iiiiiit!
person oetbmalfoysmom
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, bliss.... A new chapter AND a mention in the AN! I regard that as an honor considering the many, many reviews this story has attained. I've certainly done my best to recommend "Tin Angel" anywhere I can. Once again, you never disappoint. This chapter was wonderful. Hermione mirroring Draco's literary lovemaking was precious. Although, keeping coherent thought whilst in the throes of passion is quite a feat. If any characters can successfully pull this off, it is definitely Draco and Hermione. Intelligence and wit make up the bulk of their attraction to one another in the world of fanfiction. You outdid yourself with the witty banter but what really stands out for me is your attention to the details in the beginning with Draco's concentration focused on Hermione's loose curls. Too often, her "bushy mane" referenced in a story becomes cliche. You turn this feature into something desireable and sexy. Bravo on the numerous nominations you have received. You deserve each and every one. I'll certainly be voting early and often. Thank you once again for satisfying my seemingly unending need for excellent fiction.
person Miya
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*jaw drops*

For a moment there, I thought Hermione slept over at his flat. Huh. Wishful thinking, my head's still swimming from that garden scene. Wow! Keep up the good work, and I am waiting with bated breath to see what will happen now that Harry and Ron (and heck, even Bill!) know about Hermione's secret dates with Draco. Unless of course, they don't see the Prophet, hehehehehe.

Still loving your fic! :D
person oetbmalfoysmom
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HELP! I'm going through "Tin Angel" withdrawal! Please have pity on a D/H ship junkie. A one chapter fix, that's all I need~
person kenzi
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loves it!!!! can't wait for the next chapter. :) I'd love to be added to the mailing list as well :) punky_monkey34@hotmail.com
person Edleen
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I'm in LOVE w/ your story, over Xmas break I kept thinking I'd miss updates so I'd be eternally grateful if you added me to your email update list, thnx.
person Jessica
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Breathtaking.

I'm vowing right now to read every piece of writing you've referenced.
Any tips on finding them?

And I'd love to be on the list for email updates.
person Jessica
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not really sure as to how reviews work, so in case you didn't get it from the post, my email address is lachrymalice@gmail.com.
person NAR
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I've ever read anything like that, ever. I don't usually like fluff, but that was very well done. Draco is very sweet, sentemential, I don't want to say sappy because it has a negative connotation, but he's very, very romantic. He's not a believable canon, but considering that you've elimated most of canon, it's a pretty good fanon. Tin Angel is highly versatile for other fandoms, which I amused me for a bit. I like all the allusions to great literature you have, especially to Milan Kundera- he is one of my favorites. It gives Tin Angel much more depth, but I think you should tone it down. It's fanfiction. Also, although you write very well, and the readers are eager to learn what happens next, there's really no point to it, nothing terribly compelling other than your nice writing. Though plotless, happyhappy-joyjoy is very enjoyable at times, I think it would be much better if we saw a bit more conflict in Tin Angel.
You have great taste in literature.
Excellent job and please, email me when you update.
person freda
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love tin angel. Great writing- esp Neruda. Please update soon, I am almost as horny as Draco!!! Do you have other fics that I can read? Please put me on your update list.

thanks,

Freda