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for Tin Angel

by AraLuna

person Kenda
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I loved the new chapter. It's the verbal teasing and banter between Draco and Hermione I think that makes your story stand out so clearly. It's witty and cleaver while still having the most incredibly erotic moments such as the 'Anais Nin' scene from this chapter.

And what a point to finish on too! I can't wait to read the next chapter and see The Weasleys reaction to the article, inparticular Fred and Geoge's dismay at having their thunder stolen and Bill's reaction maybe.

Than you for another brillliantly enjoyable update.
person firewall
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 6 - May I mention again how much I love this story? I was especially glad to see an update. Now I was expecting a picture of them in the Prophet when you mentioned Fred and George and their propensity at getting in the paper BUT when you had Hermione perform her little titilation by the garden wall, I was really afraid a photographer had snapped a picture of them during this interlude. *fans self*

I am looking forward to the next chapter and congratulations on the triple nomination! This story is well worth it.
person Anon
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT !!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!! please!

I love it

geo
person Vicky
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with this story!! I love how it moves so beautifully and I love how elegant your writing is!! and the smut OH lordy I can't get enough! Patiently waiting next update!! :D
person *rei*
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! draco and hermione has been caught! hehehe...

another great chapter! BRILLIANT!!!
the little lime scene was hot and sentual... as always!
The chapter was short, but anticipation makes the story better!
person tali
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha holy shit,.
person Darian
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay I know it takes a bit sometimes to get the creative juices flowing but I implore you to update this as soon as possible! I will burst from the suspense! Congrats on your nomination! I have a feeling you'll be receiving much more of those!
person ---
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story just keeps getting better and better.
Keep up the wonderful work!
person swtcaro
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this fic. Your writing is so well thought out. The events and thoughts have good transitions; they don't take giant leaps that are unrealistic. The only thing I can ask is for you to write more faster! :)
person elektrik_storm
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very hpt again and i love the last few paragraphs! i really shouldn't laugh as it hurts lol! please update soon!!!